RichardStacy
Joined 14 January 2010
Latest comment: 14 years ago by Urbanrenewal in topic Doughty Hanson
Doughty Hanson edit
I have added the bulk of the requested content in a way that I thought would not impair the neutral point of view of the article. You should feel free to make further edits so long as they are consistent with the propoer WP:TONE of Wikipedia. |► ϋrбanяeneωaℓ • TALK ◄| 14:31, 30 March 2010 (UTC)
- You should feel free to make the edits you feel appropriate. Not every edit needs to be discussed. The commentary on the fund IV fundraising may not be the most positive but it is accurate and factual. I don't see any reason to sanitize the article. If you want to add additional commentary I would be supportive but per my comments about Tone I would be disappointed if your goal was simply to turn this into an advertising vehicle. The company has a website where it can include whatever spin it likes. |► ϋrбanяeneωaℓ • TALK ◄| 01:14, 31 March 2010 (UTC)