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The Bugle: Issue 215, March 2024

Your Military History Newsletter Project news: From the editors; awards and honours; contest results Articles: Last month's new featured and A-class content Book review: Hawkeye7 and Nick-D look at four recent works

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The Bugle: Issue 216, April 2024

Your Military History Newsletter Project news: From the editors; awards and honours; contest results Articles: Last month's new featured and A-class content Book review: Hawkeye7, Nick-D and Pickersgill-Cunliffe discuss six (count 'em, six!) works comprising eight volumes Op-ed: Hawkeye7 on a lecture by the Australian official historian

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6th century slavs invasion of Dalmatia

Hello, OyMosby. You have new messages at Talk:Dalmatia#6th century slavs.
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--Bejnar (talk) 19:08, 30 April 2024 (UTC)

Hello @Bejnar, just saw your message. I will try to get back to you this evening. I think I see partly your concern and also the unclear communication on my part. And how the sentence in the intro may not be as clear as it should. Will expand on this on the article’s talk page and take a look at the sources you provided there. Thank you for your patience. Cheers! OyMosby (talk) 18:23, 1 May 2024 (UTC)

I will be on travel status 3–15 May, and may not be able to logon until then. I look forward to a fruitful exchange. --Bejnar (talk) 23:43, 1 May 2024 (UTC)

In that case I’ll spend the meantime reviewing the sources you provided as well as some others and get back to you later on. I restored your edit as that was more accurate than the original in April as I explained in my edit diff summary. I hadn’t read the sentence more carefully before I clicked “undo”. I still think improvements can be made in the paragraph and have some concerns with the sentences prior to the Southern Slav part as well. We’ll discuss when you are back. Safe travels! OyMosby (talk) 11:20, 2 May 2024 (UTC)