Olieboyd

Your submission at Articles for creation: Ohm phanphiroj (May 19)

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MatthewVanitas (talk) 04:47, 19 May 2018 (UTC)

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Ohm phanphiroj (May 20)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted because it included copyrighted content, which is not permitted on Wikipedia. You are welcome to write an article on the subject, but please do not use copyrighted work.

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David.moreno72 08:35, 20 May 2018 (UTC)

Hi David,

The materials I posted did not violate any copyright, since I am the editor of the written piece on that site. I am not sure what I nee to do to satisfy the requirements. Pls let me know.

As well, I have fixed what might have been perceived as a violation, so all should be good. Pls approve this so we can move on. thanks

See Wikipedia:Copyright_violations#Information_for_copyright_owners. Also, if you own the copyright for that website, then you have a conflict of interest with the subject and should not be writing or editing articles relating to Ohm Phanphiroj. See WP:Conflict of Interest, WP:Autobiography, and WP:NOTPROMO for more information. Ian.thomson (talk) 15:22, 23 May 2018 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Ohm Phanphiroj (May 24)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted because it included copyrighted content, which is not permitted on Wikipedia. You are welcome to write an article on the subject, but please do not use copyrighted work.

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Dan arndt (talk) 01:36, 24 May 2018 (UTC)

Do not create the article using the copyrighted text again. As I've explained above, even if you are the owner of that copyright, you would need to donate the materials (instructions given in the link above), but then there's still the issues with you having a conflict of interest.

If you're going to write an article about anyone or anything, here's the steps you should follow:

1) Gather as many professionally-published mainstream academic or journalistic sources you can find.

2) Focus on just the ones that are not dependent upon or affiliated with the subject, but still specifically about the subject and providing in-depth coverage (not passing mentions). If you do not have at least three such sources, the subject is not yet notable and trying to write an article at this point will only fail.

3) Summarize those sources from step 2, adding citations at the end of them. You'll want to do this in a program with little/no formatting, like Microsoft Notepad or Notepad++, and not in something like Microsoft Word or LibreOffice Writer.

4) Combine overlapping summaries (without arriving at new statements that no individual source supports) where possible, repeating citations as needed.

5) Paraphrase the whole thing just to be extra sure you've avoided any copyright violations or plagiarism.

6) Use the Article wizard to post this draft and wait for approval.

7) Expand the article using sources you put aside in step 2 (but make sure they don't make up more than half the sources for the article, and make sure that affiliated sources don't make up more than half of that).

Doing something besides those steps typically results in the article not being approved, or even in its deletion. Ian.thomson (talk) 03:13, 24 May 2018 (UTC)