The rain is a very good metaphore, i think I'll use it. A World Without Rain. DonConquistador 07:14, 18 January 2006 (UTC)Reply

"Each fleeting crush beings a new crush, indeed,"? beings? or begins? I didn't fix it because I don't know if it is correct or not.DonConquistador 23:23, 18 January 2006 (UTC)Reply

Please use 4 ~'s to stamp your comments on user pages. And I put up a new poem. The DropDonConquistador 23:35, 18 January 2006 (UTC)Reply