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Your submission at Articles for creation: Polycentric Approach to the Management of Urban Waters (October 25) edit

Latest comment: 6 months ago4 comments2 people in discussion

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Star Mississippi were:

This submission reads more like an essay than an encyclopedia article. Submissions should summarise information in secondary, reliable sources and not contain opinions or original research. Please write about the topic from a neutral point of view in an encyclopedic manner.

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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Star Mississippi 12:36, 25 October 2023 (UTC)Reply

Good day Star Missisippi! Thank you for the review. Do you have any specific suggestions on particular sections that need improvement? MarGiann (talk) 13:42, 25 October 2023 (UTC)Reply

Hi! As the whole tone isn't encyclopedic, you'd be better served to just start over with the basics and add what WP:SIRS say about it. Star Mississippi 15:32, 27 October 2023 (UTC)Reply

Hello, MarGiann! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Star Mississippi 12:36, 25 October 2023 (UTC)Reply

Concern regarding Draft:Polycentric Approach to the Management of Urban Waters edit

Latest comment: 1 month ago1 comment1 person in discussion

Hello, MarGiann. This is a bot-delivered message letting you know that Draft:Polycentric Approach to the Management of Urban Waters, a page you created, has not been edited in at least 5 months. Drafts that have not been edited for six months may be deleted, so if you wish to retain the page, please edit it again or request that it be moved to your userspace.

If the page has already been deleted, you can request it be undeleted so you can continue working on it.

Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 13:05, 26 March 2024 (UTC)Reply

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