Maagicalme
Your name is fancy. :) ErysimumLe (talk) 06:29, 14 May 2014 (UTC)
Peer Review edit
According to the history of the page it seems you haven't added any bytes. I didn't see anything in your sandbox either so I'm not sure what you have mapped out for the page just yet. However, I think there is a lot of information that can be expanded here.
It states that her book is separated into six parts. I think if you have enough of a breakdown you could make six different headers to discuss each one. Depending on whether you got her book in time you could easily meet your 5000 byte requirement off that. Also, using what we've discussed in class you could give a brief history on how males were taking the midwives job markets from them. That should help with the byte count as well. Hope that helps.
Nickeckenrode (talk) 03:42, 4 June 2014 (UTC)