User talk:Lqy328/Agriculture in South Korea

Feedback: Jung Haerim

I think your article is translated very well. However, to give you one feedback, I think it is necessary to divide sub-paragraph by paragraph. I think it would be good to divide the sub-paragraph within each paragraph and add sub-headings. Still, thank you for your good translation. Have a nice day:) Jungdoris (talk) 23:32, 13 June 2023 (UTC)