Kkongas
Please leave me comments with your signature, Thank you Kkongas (talk) 01:59, 20 September 2012 (UTC)
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Peer Review edit
Comments: I like that you added a new study with information relevant to your page, but perhaps double-check your citation because it's flagged as an error (I know you're missing the DOI, for one). I like that you changed 'paternalistic nature' to 'maternal/paternal instincts'...I think this is more gender-friendly. I don't understand the drive behind some of your other minor edits, though; in some instances it seems as though you've just reworded things in a way that is simply different, but not necessarily any more or less clear. Dmlcarvalho (talk) 01:33, 8 November 2012 (UTC)