Jgalt87

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added a criticism section but need help

Added a criticism section on the Pashtunwali article but I need as I can't find much accurate information that is used to criticise it. I have included a criticism of badal(revenge) by Malala Yousafzai and people arguing it empowers women less than Islamic law(the writer of Pakistan: a Hard Country) or doesn't give women enough freedom(the writer of Veil of Resilience).

I cannot find many other criticisms and not sufficiently empowering women seems vague if i can't think of specific examples of women being devalued.

I would love to get back to helping out on this article, but unfortunately am slammed with work and do not have sufficient time to give proper effort. I believe there were others on the page who could help out. You should be able to find some readily available reliable sources addressing the treatment of women. Good luck! Jgalt87 (talk) 18:51, 10 August 2019 (UTC)