User talk:Hss86/Judeo-Yemeni Arabic
Latest comment: 3 years ago by Chuck Haberl in topic Final Review
Final Review edit
Hi Huda, this is my feedback for your final project. The 6 points on which I'm grading you are Language, Structure, Balance, Accuracy, Relevance, and Length. Here are my assessments on each of those areas:
- Language: On the whole, the article employs proper English spelling and grammar. 5 points.
- Structure: The article focuses on three main areas and there is no lead. 4 points.
- Balance: At present, the article appears to reflect a neutral point of view. 5 points.
- Accuracy: It is difficult to gauge the accuracy of many claims, because they are not furnished with citations. Most of the citations derive from four scholarly sources. 3 points.
- Relevance: Not all of information is relevant, particularly the history section, which focuses on the history of the people rather than the history of the language they speak. 3 points.
- Length: Word count 1630/2000 (including headers but not bibliography). 4 points.
The final score is 24/30. Have a great summer! Chuck Haberl (talk) 20:00, 11 May 2021 (UTC)