User talk:Greenman/Archive2022-10-23

Can you please tell me whats wrong with my article. What must i do to ensure that my name are Blue in other refences instead of Red. What must i do to change my username. ReltonBooysen22 (talk) 13:36, 30 April 2022 (UTC)

good day can you please explain whats wrong with my article relton booysen. What do i need to change? Regards,Relton ReltonBooysen22 (talk) 22:23, 30 April 2022 (UTC)

@ReltonBooysen22:

Hi and welcome to Wikipedia! I am not Greenman, but I do have a few comments.

First, autobiographies are usually inherently biased. Yours did not seem very neutral and was written in a manner that seemed a bit promotional, which is not something we want. It also repeats a lot of information. I have fixed some of these errors, but there's still some to be cleaned up. See WP:AUTOBIO.

Second, it needs more reliable sources, that way you can support the info provided.

Third, many of the sources that are provided are cited incorrectly (see our WP:CITE page for how to cite the sources properly). They should not just be bare URLS. You can use the visual editor to easily do this (that's personally what I use too).

Don't feel discouraged, though. :) If it is rewritten properly and has reliable sources to back it, your draft may be accepted.

Regards

98.179.127.59 (talk) 03:32, 1 May 2022 (UTC)

good day thank for the feedback.

The information on Relton Booysen is my coaching career and information on coach. What you suggest i change it too instead of autobiographies. All I want is my coaching profile to be on Wikipedia as i am going to apply for a lot of coaching positions now after Basketball Africa league. I not understand what you meant reliable sources since all the references comes form news papers. ESPN, FIBA etc. Please i would appreciate it if you can give me examples.

i am new to Wikipedia and its not easy to navigate like other platforms. I will read up on the visual editor. I do not understand what you mean by neutral as I state my coaching career. I have spend a lot of time the last week on this process>if there was a life chat or a zoom option to explain to users it would be easier. Its really difficult to setup this page. ReltonBooysen22 (talk) 07:07, 1 May 2022 (UTC)

@ReltonBooysen22 Hi! Thank you for the response, I really should have explained it a lot better.

I have fixed a lot of the issues I described that were remaining, including the bare URLs and repetitive content (not 100% though, there are still some issues). I also simplified the sentences a lot so that they don't sound as promotional. However, please keep in mind the policies of WP:NEUTRAL, WP:RELIABLE, and WP:CITE when you add new content. Your draft also needs to be notable enough to be accepted, and it is important to see the conflict of interest policy and disclose your conflict of interest (the best place to do so is your user page).

Also, what I said earlier isn't to say that all autobiographies (biography of oneself) will remain biased, but a lot of the time, if they are written by one person only, then they usually need peer review and improvements to make sure that they are neutral and unbiased. Otherwise, they may be declined. There is also a list of frequently discussed and used sources here, with information about their reliability. 98.179.127.59 (talk) 16:55, 1 May 2022 (UTC)

Good day

I really feel i am making a burden of myself. What is still outstanding. Should i ask people that are connected to the Basketball Africa League to come and edit an verify my detail. This is really a complicated process. When all users add there user account do they select autobiography ? I just want to make sure i selected the correct article. I sincerely hope we can fix this tomorrow. Regards, and thank for the help. ReltonBooysen22 (talk) 00:05, 2 May 2022 (UTC)

Hi. Please read WP:COI, WP:NEUTRAL, and WP:NOTABLE; hopefully these will clear your doubts. 98.179.127.59 (talk) 00:13, 2 May 2022 (UTC)

It seems that you also have received feedback here. 98.179.127.59 (talk) 00:18, 2 May 2022 (UTC)

Also, you need more sources. Per WP:VERIFY and WP:ORIGINALRESEARCH, the article should be backed by reliable sources that don't just have passing mentions of thr subject. These sources should be able to support most of the info in the article, including basic stuff like your place of birth and birth date, even if you really are Relton and the one who has written the article. Without verifiable sources, the article will be declined. 98.179.127.59 (talk) 00:23, 2 May 2022 (UTC)

good day

Please assist. what must i do further to get my account up and running. its realy a process that frustrates me now. ReltonBooysen22 (talk) 07:42, 3 May 2022 (UTC)

What do you mean? You account already exists. 98.179.127.59 (talk) 14:36, 5 May 2022 (UTC)

Good day

I added citations / references, please review. Regards, Relton ReltonBooysen22 (talk) 21:18, 7 May 2022 (UTC)

Hi Greenman. I have drafted the wiki page for CN Logisitcs Limited. You mentioned that I should not resubmit the wiki page before doing disclosure. I just write that I work for the company in my user page. So now should be fine for the wiki page to get the approval ? Ytcjerry970706 (talk) 06:47, 14 June 2022 (UTC)

Hey, my draft article (Draft:Rincón, Cuba) is a real place in Cuba. By the Wikipedia:GEOLAND rule very single place that is a official town is notable so it has to have a article. I’m new to Wikipedia but please tell me if I’m wrong about this. CubanoBoi (talk) 19:45, 7 July 2022 (UTC)

Where can I have a consensus for Draft:Shekhani dialect Muhafiz-e-Pakistan (talk) 14:04, 26 July 2022 (UTC)

You can raise it on the Talk page for Kamkata-vari language or Shekhani dialect.Greenman (talk) 19:12, 26 July 2022 (UTC)

Good afternoon,

I saw you have declined my article.Draft:Josh Guberman

Could you explain to me why and what was the problem? I have spent a lot of time on that and it made me very upset that it is all for nothing...

Please give me some advice. Thank you! Losojosazules (talk) 20:26, 12 August 2022 (UTC)

Hello Greenman,

Thanks for reviewing my article (Mohammad Hassan Peerhossaini.) You have mentioned that my personal information has no verifiable reference. As you know, in France there is no inline-accessible site to verify the personal information of people to refer to. The only official document is what is called “livret de famille” delivered by the City Hall of the place you live. I have this document available (which of course confirms the information I have mentioned in my article). I and have made scans of its pages, how can I post it on Wikipedia? Please advise.

Regards

HP Hpeerhos (talk) 14:47, 17 August 2022 (UTC)

Hi Greenman. Thanks for reviewing my article (Draft:Qupital) and for giving me feedback. It was very useful as I did not initially notice that my article had many advertisement components. I have just updated and resubmitted the article. Would it be possible for you to review it again? Thank you very much and your feedback is greatly appreciated.

Regards, 1205edit (talk) 19:27, 19 August 2022 (UTC)

Hello Greenman,

Thank you for your feedback on my article, I went back through and revised and edited sentences that could be interpreted as promotional. I do have a lot of sources from news worthy sites like Forbes, Businesswire, billboard etc. The only information I pulled from the company website was the list of venues. Please let me know if you have any additional feedback. Appreciate you. Draft:Tao Group Hospitality 66.116.126.211 (talk) 23:27, 22 August 2022 (UTC)

Hello Greenman! I can't figure out where to make changes in my post. Please help me! Oltinbayevvv (talk) 06:13, 25 August 2022 (UTC)

Hi Greenman, thank you for the feedback on my draft, Im glad I submitted it. I was curious what is meant by "reliable sources" as it relates to this draft, I read about it so I guess I understand wiki's definition of it but is possible to let me know what specifically does or doesn't work related to the sources I provided? I have another source from recent press that was published on WIRED, a bigger outlet, do you think this is better to include? Thank you and I hope to hear from you soon! SolarNinjaTroy (talk) 20:44, 27 August 2022 (UTC)

Dear Greenman:

I appreciate your looking at my draft (on Anna Frajlich) and offering a feedback. I realise that you prefer not to engage in discussions about your verdicts, but I followed your advice, added more links and references and posted a request for advice on the draft's "talk" page, but there has been not reaction so far. You are my only critic :) Do you mind if I ask you to take another look and let me know what else I can do? I get the point about verifiable sources, but in case of immigrant writers, it is really hard for them to get coverage in mainstream media outlets, but Frajlich's oeuvre is enormous, well documented in various immigrant publications, and the fact that an entire issue of a professional periodical was dedicated exclusively to her writing and her career speaks for itself. Also (I don't know how important it is) there is already a page about her in the Polish Wikipedia. Her notability is established already in the wikiworld. I would really appreciate any feedback. I do take it seriously. Thank you, MatrosMonk. MatrosMonk (talk) 22:43, 2 September 2022 (UTC)

Hello. Can you please tell me what is wrong with my article. You said "This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources", but this article's sources are Japanese famous newspapers such as Sports Hochi Newspaper, Industrial and Economic Newspaper, Zaikei Newspaper. And do you really understand the Japanese sources? And there's already article written in Japanese Wikipedia. It seems the assessment criteria is so vague. Bztn999 (talk) 13:45, 9 September 2022 (UTC)

Hello Greenman,

Can you please help me understand what is wrong with my article?

You mentioned that I should "remove external links", but it appears that many other wikipedia articles contain external links.

You also mentioned to include more reliable resources, but the sources I used were official and directly supported their corresponding claims.

I would greatly appreciate your feedback.

Thank you

-Tim Timothy Philip S (talk) 17:17, 16 September 2022 (UTC)

Hello, Can you please suggest some changes in the Wiki page that I have created about my Professor? 171.76.86.43 (talk) 00:26, 23 September 2022 (UTC)

Good day, i wanted to get the feedback regarding the EIP-3475 (Abstract Bonds standard) as i also put the comments on the page and addressing all the issues (COI and links). could you review and explain if there is any further changes needed. thanks LesDecroissant (talk) 08:59, 3 October 2022 (UTC)

Greetings.

Sir/Ma'am,

Most humbly, I would like to state that the undersigned wanted to create a Wikipedia Page in my name with all the credentials about me as uploaded. However, it's been rejected due to LACK OF RELIABLE RESOURCES, as stated.

I have the honour to inform you that the undersigned was a Professor of Gauhati University (https://gauhati.ac.in/) and currently, I am appointed as the Hon'ble Adviser, Education (https://education.assam.gov.in/), Government of Assam (https://assam.gov.in/) and all the data/information uploaded are true to the best of my knowledge (which may kindly be verified by the concerned for kind perusal of the authority of Wikipedia (https://www.wikipedia.org/), if agreed.

In case any issues on the reliability of the information(s), kindly feel free to contact the undersigned at the following contact details:

Prof. (Dr.) NAni Gopal Mahanta,

Adviser, Education,

Government of Assam,

2nd Floor, Block - C,

Assam Secretariat (Janata Bhawan),

Dispur, Guwahati - 781006,

Assam, India,

Email Id: advisereducationassam@gmail.com,

Phone No.: (+91) (0361) 2237131 (Official).

Therefore, you are once again requested to kindly look into the matter and take necessary action accordingly for implementation of the same, if please.

Regards,

Prof. (Dr.) Nani Gopal Mahanta,

Adviser, Education,

Government of Assam. Ngmahanta (talk) 07:08, 7 October 2022 (UTC)

Petrus Crabbe

Many thanks for preventing my notice on Petrus Crabbe being published. I've deleted the content, and I'd be grateful if you'd just delete what's left. I should have known better than to write it. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2A00:23C6:62A3:1F01:455:198D:4330:D4CD (talk) 21:02, 11 August 2022 (UTC)

Query

I have done as you asked. Do I understand correctly, that the reason why your text asking if I'm here to talk about a draft article is the only text that I see on your talk page, is because you have moved all other text to your Archives? And did my post prompt you to do so? Just curious, as I've had different experiences with reviewers of my previous two articles, both of which were accepted, and I'm concerned to respond appropriately to well-intended criticism.2603:6010:4E42:500:2804:5DA3:F85:13B6 (talk) 02:10, 26 January 2022 (UTC)

Hi, yes, the reason the text does not appear here any more is that it was moved to my talk page archives. Every now and again I do so to prevent the talk page becoming too heavy. It wasn't specifically your post that prompted this, but since I became active on reviewing Drafts in 2021, I've been getting a lot of requests, and I thought a notice would be useful. The intention is to give constructive advice to the submitter, and avoid frustration with my lack of response. Responding on the Draft page or another dedicated page means followup reviewers can benefit from the discussion. The time I spend on reviewing is quite limited, and the backlog so large, that I usually spend it on a new submissions. Good luck getting the article approved! Greenman (talk) 11:42, 26 January 2022 (UTC)

Nomination for deletion of Template:Adminer version

Template:Adminer version has been nominated for deletion. You are invited to comment on the discussion at the entry on the Templates for discussion page. – Jonesey95 (talk) 18:29, 29 January 2022 (UTC)

Southern Africa Discord

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Hi Greenman, I would like to invite you to the Wikimedia South Africa Discord Server.

Discord allows instant text, voice and video communication and is used for all the South Africa Wikipedians monthly meetups.

See Wikipedia:Meetup/South Africa, the next one is on 26 February 2022 at 10:00am SAST Wikipedia:Meetup/South_Africa/South_Africa_15

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Request on 14:52:25, 2 February 2022 for assistance on AfC submission by TheAzzurroSky532

• TheAzzurroSky532 (talk · contribs)
  • Draft:Raphael Fusco (edit | talk | history | links | watch | logs)

Thank you for your feedback to my article draft!

I did some wikipedia research on notability and found this:

"attributes that may be considered toward establishing notability... as long as the attributes are themselves supported by reliable sources in their allowing then the presumption that additional sources are likely to exist. WP:ANYBIO allows that ANY individual may be presumed notable if "the person has received a notable award or honor, or has been nominated for one several times", OR "the person has made a widely recognized contribution that is part of the enduring historical record in their specific field". Meeting these "attributes" allows editors to accept a presumption in good faith that other sources are likely to exist without also demanding that these "other sources" be immediately found and offered."

The subject I am writing about won notable awards and prizes. So if I find what you called "reliable sources" and remove external links then I can re-submit the article?

TheAzzurroSky532 (talk) 14:52, 2 February 2022 (UTC)

WP:AFC Helper News

Hello! I wanted to drop a quick note for all of our AFC participants; nothing huge and fancy like a newsletter, but a few points of interest.

• AFCH will now show live previews of the comment to be left on a decline.
• The template {{db-afc-move}} has been created - this template is similar to {{db-move}} when there is a redirect in the way of an acceptance, but specifically tells the patrolling admin to let you (the draft reviewer) take care of the actual move.

Short and sweet, but there's always more to discuss at WT:AFC. Stop on by, maybe review a draft on the way? Whether you're one of our top reviewers, or haven't reviewed in a while, I want to thank you for helping out in the past and in the future. Cheers, Primefac, via MediaWiki message delivery (talk) 16:00, 16 February 2022 (UTC)

Article s6 (init)

Good morning Greenman. New reference links have been added to the s6 (init) article showing its relevance in the GNU/Linux environment. It remains then to be reviewed. Thank you very much. --Rstmnq1000 (talk) 17:44, 17 February 2022 (UTC)

Nomination for deletion of Template:COVID-19 pandemic data/South Africa, Western Cape medical cases chart

Template:COVID-19 pandemic data/South Africa, Western Cape medical cases chart has been nominated for deletion. You are invited to comment on the discussion at the entry on the Templates for discussion page. Nigej (talk) 07:50, 19 February 2022 (UTC)

Nomination for deletion of Template:Crafter CMS version

Template:Crafter CMS version has been nominated for deletion. You are invited to comment on the discussion at the entry on the Templates for discussion page. – Jonesey95 (talk) 17:45, 22 February 2022 (UTC)

NPROF

You say "See also WP:NPROF" here - https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Draft%3AKelly-Ann_Allen&type=revision&diff=1058568537&oldid=1057561391 - when declining a draft at AfC, and yet NPROF C2 is has received a highly prestigious academic award or honor at a national or international level, and the subject in this case has been awarded a fellowship of the Australian Psychological Society, which appears to be a highly selective award - https://psychology.org.au/about-us/who-we-are/aps-honorary-fellows,-fellows-and-life-members ... possibly it is you that needs to have a better understanding of NPROF? --Tagishsimon (talk) 07:33, 25 February 2022 (UTC)

Articles for creation: Hakan Yanar

Thank you for your feedback to my article draft! I have used the template of journal while creating the citations. And I didn't get what was wrong with it. Your assistance will be appreciated Thank you in advance. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Muge.seymen (talk • contribs) 13:08, 3 March 2022 (UTC)

Nomination for deletion of Template:Typo (software) version

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Nomination for deletion of Template:FarCry CMS version

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A barnstar for your efforts

		COVID-19 Barnstar
		Awarded for efforts in expanding and verifying articles related to COVID-19. Awarded by Cdjp1 (talk) 8 March 2022 (UTC)

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My Recent Article on The Ivory Coast Crown Jewels

Hello there Ian,

Thank you for your feedback regarding my recent article. Yes, you are correct that I did source my own website around the same time as I made the wiki article. With my blog post, I did do plenty of research from other reliable sources to put there, which was then reflected onto the wiki page. I can put those resources down on the wiki article if that helps it to get accepted.

Any help would be fantastic! Thank you for your time and I hope you are having a great day!

Alex 64.126.87.148 (talk) 19:21, 9 March 2022 (UTC)

The source material for Flora Cheung has been modified

Hello, the source information of Flora Cheung has been modified. If you have any more questions, please check it out, thank you! 14.136.61.154 (talk) 19:54, 31 March 2022 (UTC)

Review of Article - Draft:Vivian Granger

Please could you do another review of my above article. I have updated it by citing numerous references. Thanking you for your time. 41.113.69.82 (talk) 11:33, 11 April 2022 (UTC)

Request on 09:31:46, 13 April 2022 for assistance on AfC submission by FFCETT77

• FFCETT77 (talk · contribs)
  • Draft:Peter Queally (fighter) (edit | talk | history | links | watch | logs)

Because Peter Queally is not ranked in the top 10 in his weight class does that mean I cannot publish an article of him? Because there are many mma lightweight fighters who have Wikipedia articles who have never been close to the top 10 of the world lightweight rankings. Please could you clear this up for me Thanks for reviewing and the feedback FFCETT77 (talk) 09:31, 13 April 2022 (UTC)

Response to comment for "Draft:List of tropical depressions"

Unlike the first one, the draft uses notable depressions (depressions with articles relating to it), unlike the first one, as the reason for deletion nomination states that the article "gives a list of non-notable storms." And while the deletion nomination also states that "TD's occur all of the time", some of these tropical depression on the draft list did major damage, with Tropical Depression Winnie (one of the tropical depressions on the list) being one of the worst tropical cyclones in the Philippines's history, and it never reached tropical storm status. In fact, the first name for the list had "notable" in it's title, just to differentiate it from the first one (but it got changed to what it is now, as it's not neutral.)

TL;DR: The list uses actually notable tropical depressions. Mobius Gerig (talk) 20:15, 18 April 2022 (UTC)

RE: Draft:Mount Kyzylarai

Just letting you know that, per WP:AFCSTANDARDS#1, you shouldn't decline a (non-BLP, non-contentious) draft just because it doesn't have inline citations; this particular draft is fine in that instance because it has general referencing. Not a big deal, just making sure you're aware. Keep up the good work! Curbon7 (talk) 19:37, 20 April 2022 (UTC)

Proposed deletion of Mohamed Haddouche

The article Mohamed Haddouche has been proposed for deletion because of the following concern:

Single reference is a blog for this BLP.

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Proposed deletion of Aimen Rizouk

The article Aimen Rizouk has been proposed for deletion because it appears to have no references. Under Wikipedia policy, this biography of a living person will be deleted after seven days unless it has at least one reference to a reliable source that directly supports material in the article.

If you created the article, please don't be offended. Instead, consider improving the article. For help on inserting references, see Referencing for beginners, or ask at the help desk. Once you have provided at least one reliable source, you may remove the {{prod blp/dated}} tag. Please do not remove the tag unless the article is sourced. If you cannot provide such a source within seven days, the article may be deleted, but you can request that it be undeleted when you are ready to add one. scope_creep^Talk 19:29, 3 May 2022 (UTC)

Nomination of Aimen Rizouk for deletion

A discussion is taking place as to whether the article Aimen Rizouk is suitable for inclusion in Wikipedia according to Wikipedia's policies and guidelines or whether it should be deleted.

The article will be discussed at Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Aimen Rizouk until a consensus is reached, and anyone, including you, is welcome to contribute to the discussion. The nomination will explain the policies and guidelines which are of concern. The discussion focuses on high-quality evidence and our policies and guidelines.

Users may edit the article during the discussion, including to improve the article to address concerns raised in the discussion. However, do not remove the article-for-deletion notice from the top of the article.

scope_creep^Talk 14:33, 4 May 2022 (UTC)

Nomination of Mohamed Haddouche for deletion

A discussion is taking place as to whether the article Mohamed Haddouche is suitable for inclusion in Wikipedia according to Wikipedia's policies and guidelines or whether it should be deleted.

The article will be discussed at Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Mohamed Haddouche until a consensus is reached, and anyone, including you, is welcome to contribute to the discussion. The nomination will explain the policies and guidelines which are of concern. The discussion focuses on high-quality evidence and our policies and guidelines.

Users may edit the article during the discussion, including to improve the article to address concerns raised in the discussion. However, do not remove the article-for-deletion notice from the top of the article.

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Draft:List of Mongolian flags

can you submit this draft? it took over 7 weeks for waiting... i can't wait, because im so interested about flags 2A02:A453:D05E:1:14C2:A68E:BA76:F582 (talk) 11:50, 20 May 2022 (UTC)

Request for review & approval of Wikipedia Page/Article

Hi Greenman, please I need help with my article page with review and approval it has been 6 months now. I will appreciate any feedback. warm regards! i don't know how to tag you to my sandbox but here is the link: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:George_Nyiam/sandbox George Nyiam (talk) 13:14, 21 May 2022 (UTC)

Request on 06:38:54, 23 May 2022 for assistance on AfC submission by Polysaccharides

• Polysaccharides (talk · contribs)
  • Draft:Daniel Edelson (edit | talk | history | links | watch | logs)

Hi, I wanted to ask why did you decline from the same reason which I already handled? there are so many sources on Daniel from major and probably the biggest sites in israel such as ynet, simania, walla, etc. Those articles talks about Daniel himself as well as he was a major reporter in Israel...? --Polysaccharides (talk) 06:38, 23 May 2022 (UTC)

Hi again, could you please respond? Polysaccharides (talk) 09:50, 29 May 2022 (UTC) Polysaccharides (talk) 06:38, 23 May 2022 (UTC)

Selemani Kitwana

Selemani Kitwana is a former Tanzanian soccer legend. This practice of denying African notable people a place on Wikipedia on account of insufficient coverage or “notability” is very segregative. Truth must be told that there is less record keeping in Africa, less media houses and less coverage, also less Wikipedia editors and automatically this give the continent a segregative approach by most Wikipedia editors. 154.0.157.79 (talk) 04:46, 25 May 2022 (UTC)

Draft:Meditation and Yoga Retreat

Hi Greenman. Thanks for reviewing this article and adding your comments. Will edit accordingly adding secondary sources to make it notable. Looking forward to work with you. Thanks. Gardenkur (talk) 04:44, 19 June 2022 (UTC)

Hi Greenman. Hope you are keeping well. Kindly relook this article if its suitable for mainspace. Modified content and added more references. Its about Yoga and Meditation retreat which is catching up due to wellness benefits of these retreats. Thanks in advance. Gardenkur (talk) 06:20, 19 June 2022 (UTC)

Request on 21:58:32, 21 June 2022 for assistance on AfC submission by Wennie Kams

• Wennie Kams (talk · contribs)
  • Draft:Pivotal Commware (edit | talk | history | links | watch | logs)

Hi, can you please help me rewire the first sentence? i have tried please check. Thanks

Wennie Kams (talk) 21:58, 21 June 2022 (UTC)

Request on 20:22:42, 23 June 2022 for assistance on AfC submission by Wicontrib22

• Wicontrib22 (talk · contribs)
  • Draft:Ali bin Samikh Al Marri (edit | talk | history | links | watch | logs)

Thank you Geenman for your review. I will check to add more sources.

Wicontrib22 (talk) 20:22, 23 June 2022 (UTC)

Help with a Draft

Hello Greenman.Can you please help me by reviewing a draft I made and helping me to complete and finalising it to make a complete article. The draft name is,"Draft:2022 MTN 8".

I could really need help from someone with your experience in creating articles Blaqkidd.kingofsoccer (talk) 13:02, 27 June 2022 (UTC)

Nelson Mandela

Hello, I think you have made a mistake on Nelson Mandela by reverting the wrong editor. Your edit restored two passages in the lead: that he "supported white genocide" and "his rule is comparable to those such as Adolf Hitler, Joseph Stalin and Mao Zedong". Did you really mean to do that? Netherzone (talk) 14:49, 27 June 2022 (UTC)

Thanks for fixing @Netherzone: not intentional, I just didn't fully revert all the vandalism! Greenman (talk) 19:43, 27 June 2022 (UTC)

No worries, I just wanted to give you a heads up. Thanks for all you do here! Netherzone (talk) 21:06, 27 June 2022 (UTC)

5th century in Lebanon

Hello, I'll remove the paragraph. Thanks for telling me. I've just directly copied from the wikipedia article about the saint, nobody seemed to have discussed any copyright or plagiarism in that Article so I just naively copied the paragraph directly from the article. دانيالوه (talk) 19:36, 7 July 2022 (UTC)

Also, excuse me for my ignorance, but is there a particular reason to why you deleted the references section? And can you tell me when it'll be allowed to be added back to the article? Thanks. دانيالوه (talk) 20:03, 7 July 2022 (UTC)

@دانيالوه: no reason, I wasn't even aware I'd done it! It happened the same time as I left a comment, which is a different interface to editing the content, so I wonder if it was due to a bug in the AFCH helper script. Anyway, thanks, I see you've since restored it. Greenman (talk) 15:13, 8 July 2022 (UTC)

Oh OK no problem, thanks! دانيالوه (talk) 16:02, 8 July 2022 (UTC)

Brian Krock

RE: Draft: Brian Krock I added cites for career and removed un sourced content in early life. Mistephake (talk) 16:07, 8 July 2022 (UTC)

Wikimania 2022 in South Africa

Wikimania 2022 is almost here (11-14 August 2022) and will be held entirely online this year with the exception of a number of local mini-Wikimania's for local community members. I just wanted to let you know that two local Wikimania mini-events will be happening in South Africa; one in Cape Town and one in Johannesburg. Participants will be able to attend both the international event from these local events. If you are interested, available and in the area at the time we would be delighted to have you join us. For more information please checkout the South Africa mini-event page here. You can also fill out the interest form here. Discott (talk) 09:42, 15 July 2022 (UTC)

Request on 11:07:06, 20 July 2022 for assistance on AfC submission by Ennylron

• Ennylron (talk · contribs)
  • Draft:Gin Rum and Truth (edit | talk | history | links | watch | logs)

I hope you could help me with this article. I was thinking the links or resources I used may not work in the location you are right now. Is it possible? If not, what do you think should i work on. I already included the news articles, and websites in the references section. Thank you so much for your help.

Ennylron (talk) 11:07, 20 July 2022 (UTC)

Request on 15:41:12, 14 August 2022 for assistance on AfC submission by SwissAthletics

• SwissAthletics (talk · contribs)
  • Draft:Paul McIntyre (Swiss Runner) (edit | talk | history | links | watch | logs)

Hello @Greenman, Thank you for taking the time to review my article. Could you help me better understand what I can change in order to get my article approved? Is the number of references too low? I thought were enough independent news articles already cited but perhaps not. Is there anything else I can work on? Thanks SwissAthletics (talk) 15:41, 14 August 2022 (UTC)

Bring Back Nyombi

Mr. Greenman, we don't understand why you want to keep nyombi's page in isolation, people have tried adding and removing all the so called urls you mentioned but we don't see his page being approved, you can't tell me someone who has been featured almost everywhere,BBC, CNN, CBC News, WION, Global Citizen, TRT World, TED,award winner, and has a verified twitter account, but has a fake wikipedia profile, like seriously to me i see this has a sign of discrimination. which we don't want to see on wiki. You can't just drop Nyombi's page in draft for so long man. Alien234 (talk) 12:38, 15 August 2022 (UTC)

Request on 08:10:45, 16 August 2022 for assistance on AfC submission by Krn1919

• Krn1919 (talk · contribs)
  • Draft:RTL AdConnect (edit | talk | history | links | watch | logs)

Hi, I struggle to publish my draft about RTL AdConnect, as the article is deemed as not having enough reliable sources.Although I read about the referencing policy of wikipedia, I don't understand why my sources are not good. Because I used some sources from renown media outlets and they are in no way linked to the company. I'd like to know what would be an acceptable sources. Or is the problem the quality of the articles Im referencing to ? I also looked at other companies working in the same field as RTL AdConnect, and their wikipedia page seems to be have sources from media outlets. Thanks for your help.

Krn1919 (talk) 08:10, 16 August 2022 (UTC)

You only contribute to south african pages

Hi, you recently dropped, Nyombi's page, I was asking since am not the perfect editor why don't you find someone to rewrite instead other than freezing him forever, at first you said, is paying me to do so, but I decided to give you a chance to find good people to update it without me adding anything, but you haven't, should we say you only help those from your country or do you guys work for only those you know. I think Nyombi has all information needed and he doesn't need to die to have a Wikipedia, stop your discrimination comments, we have seen many famous people with Wikipedia when they're still alive, you can't say let the subject first die, why can't you atleast get someone to edit and return his page online. it doesn't make sense for sure, I tried updating it but all my requests were declined, it's now five days no one bothering to add in the information required. Rewrite if you want but return in back online, stop eliminating him. Alien234 (talk) 21:54, 19 August 2022 (UTC)

Resubmitted my article

Hi there, thanks for your feedback and review

I have resubmitted my article on Pemandu Associates. Hope you can look into it. Thanks in advance. Davidt1510 (talk) 01:14, 21 August 2022 (UTC)

Link to draft article: https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Pemandu_Associates Davidt1510 (talk) 01:15, 21 August 2022 (UTC)

Draft:Paul M. Sparrow

Regarding your reasons for rejecting this draft, could you kindly identify the "unreliable sources" and any passages containing "unreliable tone." The sources for this draft have been meticulously vetted and consistently accepted in many other Wikipedia pages. I have some idea of which specific source/s you are referring to, I can easily correct. Regarding tone, the draft follows a strict subject/verb structure with no adjectives or non-neutral passages that I can identify. Any assistance on this issue would be greatly appreciated. Thank you. Danceswithedits (talk) 18:17, 22 August 2022 (UTC)

Draft:SkyShowtime

Draft:SkyShowtime can this draft be anywhere in the Showtime article? After all,, there is a section there talking about it. RamsesTimeGame (talk) 04:07, 23 August 2022 (UTC)

On Draft:2022–23 Scottish Cup

Fyi, there is {{db-afc-move}} to delete off the redirect to use if you want to approve the draft but being blocked by the redirect. – robertsky (talk) 15:02, 23 August 2022 (UTC)

Request on 18:55:55, 24 August 2022 for assistance on AfC submission by Amandeep96

• Amandeep96 (talk · contribs)
  • Draft:New Financial Model (edit | talk | history | links | watch | logs)

My article on "New Financial Model" has been declined twice.

1. Objection was reliable sources: I had submitted reliable media coverage sources on the subject. All the reliable sources i have updated till date.

2. Objection is that Article subject do not qualify for the wikipedia. Dear Team as per my reading. It's model on Macroeconomics. Major one which is proposing new tool to central banks and universal pension system to everyone. It is challenging keynesian economics.

3. Objection is that it looks like an article, here i can improve.

4. There is no conflict of interest at all. How we can resolve it.

Hope i will get your help on completion.

Amandeep96 (talk) 18:55, 24 August 2022 (UTC)

Approval!

I would like to bring it to your kind notice about your speech at Draft:Communist Party of Nepal (Unity National Campaign) are welcomed. I would like to request you to proceed with the same and accept the article. It remains a party in light in current situation of Nepal so is currently fully notable with two national MPs. I hope the draft article will be accepted soon. 2404:7C00:43:FDC:B5E6:FD90:44E9:F5EF (talk) 15:27, 25 August 2022 (UTC)

Vidushi Sunanda Sharma

A submission you declined at AfC was moved to mainspace without addressing the issues for the decline. I was going to move it back into the draft space but since I have no involvement with AfC I wanted to discuss it with you before I did anything regarding the article. Would moving it back to draftspace be the best course of action? - Aoidh (talk) 08:14, 29 August 2022 (UTC)

@Aoidh: thanks, in my opinion the article is completely inappropriate for mainspace, but could potentially be salvaged through a rewrite in Draft, so I'd be fine with moving it back there. Greenman (talk) 10:18, 29 August 2022 (UTC)

Request on 17:40:27, 29 August 2022 for assistance on AfC submission by Infostortfordhockey

• Infostortfordhockey (talk · contribs)
  • Draft:Bishop's Stortford Hockey Club (edit | talk | history | links | watch | logs)

I would like assistance and to understand what I need to do to get the page Bishop's Stortford Hockey Club published - I have edited the page to try and answer some of your feedback. Thank you so much for your help so far.

Infostortfordhockey (talk) 17:40, 29 August 2022 (UTC)

Meriwether Lewis Electric Cooperative

Good day! You rejected the draft article Draft:Meriwether Lewis Electric Cooperative on grounds of notability...rightfully so, I didn't have it sourced as well as I should have after it had been called into question by @Bruxton. I've added additional sources from newspapers and government documentation, so it should pass notability guidelines now. Thanks, have a great day! nf utvol (talk) 18:52, 30 August 2022 (UTC)

Request on 09:29:47, 4 September 2022 for assistance on AfC submission by Cduschka

• Cduschka (talk · contribs)
  • Draft:Brisbane Rampage (edit | talk | history | links | watch | logs)

Hi mate, I'm new to Wikipedia but have followed the same layout, referencing, etc. that other pages are so not sure what needs to change? Any help would be appreciated.

As for the references to that page, others use the same website (Ice Hockey News Australia) and others. This is not a site that I administer or run. The sport is not huge in Australia so references are limited in quantity besides the official website and social media channels of the team itself which I have not used.

Thanks again!

Cody

Cduschka (talk) 09:29, 4 September 2022 (UTC)

Adding reference and removing of unsourced content for Draft:Dominic McGregor

Hi there, I already done what you advice me to do on the draft. Can I ask to review the draft submission again? Taratagaytayo (talk) 05:57, 5 September 2022 (UTC)

Assyrian Jews are a biblically and historically attested since their exile to Assyria

Codex Ambrosiano (5th-7th century copy of the Aramaic Pshitta Tanakh) includes the following books within it alongside the traditionally accepted books, and are noted by Aran Younan as being “canonical” by Assyrian Jews:"

https://www.hebrewaramaic.org/pdf/Ancient_Versions_of_the_Bible.pdf

Dr. A. Mingana, the Syriac scholar and Orientalist, expresses the same conclusion, without noticing the important details cited here.34 He thinks that the Jewish population of Arbela “forced on this part of the old Assyrian Empire a reigning dynasty of Jewish blood”—an erroneous method of statement. As far away as Mosul, in sight of ruined Nineveh, the </nowiki>Assyrian Jews<nowiki> had a fort known as hisna ‘Ebraya, “the Hebrew fortress,” which stood till the time of the Saracen conquest

https://archive.org/stream/the-lost-tribes-a-myth-suggestions-towards-rewriting-hebrew-history/The%20Lost%20Tribes%20A%20Myth%20Suggestions%20Towards%20Rewriting%20Hebrew%20History_djvu.txt

The Assyrian Neo- Aramaic language group also consists of some Jewish Aramaic dialects such as Lishana Deni, Lishán Didán, and Lishanid Noshan. These dialects are used by Assyrian Jews in Syria."

https://www.studycountry.com/guide/SY-language.htm

https://www.assyrianjews.com/

https://patriciagkirkpatrick.com/assyrian-jews-in-captivity/

consequent return of Assyrian Jews to the land of Israel"

https://www.jstor.org/stable/3267187

This shows Assyrian Jews

https://www.assyriatv.org/2020/02/lecture-by-dr-yaacov-maoz-about-assyrian-jews-in-israel/

https://www.sbs.com.au/language/assyrian/en/podcast-episode/assyrian-jews-in-israel/4lgnglru4

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rOPyLa7Uiik

https://digitalcollections.smu.edu/digital/collection/eaa/id/777/

Tobias burying the Assyrian Jews who have been murdered by Niniveh.

https://www.getty.edu/art/collection/object/109K6E

The Arabic-speaking girls also work for their fellow countrymen, Assyrian Jews, who‬ commenced their economic life in America as peddlers"

https://www.nli.org.il/he/newspapers/epo/1916/10/13/01/page/4?&

The New York office of the Jewish

Legion for Palestine lias received an

order from the British Recruiting Sec

tion permitting the enlistment in the

Jewish Legion of Syrian and Assyrian

Jews, nominally subjects of Turkey. /

Many Syrian and Assyrian Jews unable

heretofore to offer their I services

https://trove.nla.gov.au/newspaper/article/120828104

Walapo (talk) 15:45, 7 September 2022 (UTC)

Draft: Camp Mather

Hi, I see you tagged this article draft https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Camp_Mather_(San_Francisco_Recreation_and_Parks) with a Conflict of Interest WP: COI. I can't see how to respond to this charge. I have never been an employee of the camp, am not (and never have been) on any board associated with the camp, have not been an employee or volunteer with the City of San Francisco (in any capacity or location), or any such relationship. I have been a customer (camper) at the Camp. Does that establish a COI? How should this be resolved and identified? Thanks! MikeVdP (talk) 04:46, 8 September 2022 (UTC)

I moved the discussion to the article talk page. Please see it there.MikeVdP (talk) 02:26, 19 September 2022 (UTC)

Help out with reviews

Hello. Can you please review my drafts. Its about a soccer tournament which is due to start in October and a Main Page of the tournament. The Main Page is:Draft:Carling Knockout Cup The season tournament is:2022 Carling Black Label Cup Soccerking.greg127 (talk) 19:09, 9 September 2022 (UTC)

• Draft:2022 Carling Black Label Cup Soccerking.greg127 (talk) 19:10, 9 September 2022 (UTC)

Thank you

Thank you Greenman, I clearly understood your comment towards the article Draft:Choba, Port Harcourt. The correction has been made “it’s a lookout point”. Thank you once again for improving my knowledge, it really help in my future edit. Gabriel^t@lk 23:10, 12 September 2022 (UTC)

Thanks for feedback

Hello @Greenman! Thanks for taking time and reviewing my draft submission (Draft:Ravish_Tiwari).

Updated the article by removing contents and the corresponding references that could be perceived as promoting the subject as you suggested. However, still unsure if the tone of the article meets the criteria of WikiPedia. Can you please guide or help in improving the tone to an acceptable level?

Thanks! VPSingh (talk) 18:22, 16 September 2022 (UTC)

Concerns regarding accepted draft

Hey! I noticed that you accepted the draft Plug-in electric vehicles in Nebraska. I'm a bit confused as to why you deemed it appropriate for mainspace. It's basically just "There are X electric vehicles in Nebraska. There are X vehicles in X city." It really doesn't seem ready for mainspace and also doesn't seem notable. ― Blaze Wolf^Talk_{Blaze Wolf#6545} 13:07, 22 September 2022 (UTC)

Hi @Blaze Wolf:! The core purpose of the AfC process is deciding whether a submission is notable or not. It's currently little more than a stub, but there are seven reasonable quality sources on the topic, so in my evaluation it was notable and would survive WP:AFD. Greenman (talk) 13:21, 22 September 2022 (UTC)

Alright I understand that... however Wikipedia is not an indiscriminate collection of articles. Yes it may be notable but in it's current state it jsut appears to be listing the amount of electric vehicles in Nebraska and each major city in Nebraska. I myself feel that it should've been incubated in draft space a little longer before being moved to mainspace so that it had more actual content. ― Blaze Wolf^Talk_{Blaze Wolf#6545} 13:27, 22 September 2022 (UTC)

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2022 Rugby Europe Under-18 Championship

What is the problem with article? Why did you reject it? The same article exists for previous championship -2021 Rugby Europe Under-18 Championship, and there is no problem with it. Why 2022 edition is problem? I added all the sources i find. Lado85 (talk) 07:42, 2 October 2022 (UTC)

Draft:Mahalakshmi_Pavani

Hi Greenman, Could you please tell me what exactly wrong with the article, You have pointed out that the previous concerns weren't addressed. However, I have clarified the same to the previous reviewer. The reviewer said that he didn't review the article actually and just pointed out the normal issues that are common with the wiki articles in general and asked me to wait for another reviewer, please refer to the talk page if required (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User_talk:Usedtobecool#Regarding_Draft:Mahalakshmi_Pavani) I wrote this article months back after due research and have cited credible sources for the same. Don't understand why the articles are being swung out without actually taking time to review. Please tell me what is missing that is causing the article to being declined abruptly. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Raghav1788 (talk • contribs) 16:17, 2 October 2022 (UTC)

Very bad job at Draft:André Sougarret

Did you even read the sources? What makes you think that sources did not "show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject" when you have articles of Reuters and El Mercurio mentioning him in the title (La Tercera article did also mentioned him), plus the obvious facts that he is CEO of Codelco and the leader of the much-publicized 2010 Copiapó mining accident. How were you actually thinking? Mamayuco (talk) 09:29, 5 October 2022 (UTC)

You ask to remove external links though it 's all wikipedia links

Hello, About thie draft : https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Ali_Zolghadri You asked us to remove all external links. But all link are linked to wikipedia pages so it's internal links, no ? Do we need to delete it and and them as reliable sources ? Adeline.lajoinie (talk) 16:42, 5 October 2022 (UTC)

Keanin Loomis rejection

Hello, can you provide feedback on why this article was rejected? we have many references to sources, and he is a public figure in our community. What does it take for the article to be accepted? 107.190.3.250 (talk) 13:43, 9 October 2022 (UTC)

Precious anniversary

Precious

Three years!

--Gerda Arendt (talk) 06:57, 10 October 2022 (UTC)

Draft:Andrius Vaišnys

Hello, can you please point out what exactly is wrong with "Draft:Andrius Vaišnys" ? After the draft was originally declined, I added more reliable sources (as much as there are digitally available) and re-checked the article numerous times, but if the changes would seem not enough to you, not only the submission could get declined again but also deleted. Therefore I am having doubts on resubmitting. Please help me out. Vaisnys1963 (talk) 13:08, 21 October 2022 (UTC)