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22:03, 26 June 2017 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Chicago Toy & Game Group (July 1)

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Eddie891 was:  The comment the reviewer left was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.
Eddie891 Talk Work 15:45, 1 July 2017 (UTC)Reply

AfC notification: Draft:Chicago Toy & Game Group has a new comment

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I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Chicago Toy & Game Group. Thanks! — jmcgnh(talk) (contribs) 05:58, 7 August 2017 (UTC)Reply

Your submission at Articles for creation: Chicago Toy & Game Group (August 16)

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Sulfurboy was:  The comment the reviewer left was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.
Sulfurboy (talk) 15:43, 16 August 2017 (UTC)Reply

AfC notification: Draft:Chicago Toy & Game Group has a new comment

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I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Chicago Toy & Game Group. Thanks! — jmcgnh(talk) (contribs) 17:03, 16 August 2017 (UTC)Reply

Your submission at Articles for creation: Chicago Toy & Game Week (June 12)

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by In Memoriam A.H.H. was:  The comment the reviewer left was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.
In Memoriam A.H.H.What, you egg?. 18:07, 12 June 2018 (UTC)Reply

Your comments at my talk page.

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Hi there Dberks. You stated at my talk page to outline which of the prose to change. I would suggest rewriting the Star Wars Luncheon section, reword the lead on the Toy and Game Innovation Awards, and also reword the Conferences section. However, even if you reword everything I said. You still have not shown that the event is notable enough to have an article dedicated to its self. You can do that by implementing good reliable secondary sources into the article before submission, such as a well-published newspaper, or a well-known reliable news website. Please refer to WP:RSE for help. Have a nice day. In Memoriam A.H.H.What, you egg?. 16:09, 13 June 2018 (UTC)Reply