DarianaT

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Hello DarianaT, you did a good work but there are something others to do like you added "Campbell, California" don't put them together, put them with different Wikilinks like "Campbell, California" and make the notable names in italic. And two more things, as you removed the "External links" that is an important section as it contains the official website of the magazine, secondly you also removed the categories, so put the article into some category but into some proper categories. If you need any help let me know, put a message at my talk page or below this reply, Good luck.-- Assassin! No, Captain Assassin! ^{( T - C - G )} 01:53, 18 May 2013 (UTC)