User talk:Clarlari/sandbox

Hi Blue Carbon group!

Your page is super impressive and well-written. I didn't change any of the content on your page but worked to add links to other wiki pages, fixed a few typos, and worked to make sentence structure more simple and easy to understand. The only things I noticed that might need work are that 1. there is some redundancy (especially in decline/destruction of blue carbon habitat that's mentioned in several sections) and 2. a lot of facts that need to be cited aren't cited yet.

KatieKoalas (talk) 20:23, 1 March 2016 (UTC)

Hey Guys,

I am incredibly impressed by your page. Very detailed and fairly easy to follow. Just as Katie stated above, my only slight criticism would be some redundancy but otherwise, very well done! MKula2010 (talk) 01:19, 2 March 2016 (UTC)

Hey guys!

Your page is impressive. I only added some links to other wiki pages to it. However, you should make sure that you have references for all your information. Especially, the part on "Human changes to sedimentary systems could need some more references.

Cheers, Marie — Preceding unsigned comment added by Wiki atmos (talk • contribs) 04:35, 2 March 2016 (UTC)