Charles Dickinson

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Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! MatthewVanitas (talk) 20:08, 25 October 2012 (UTC)

• Comment: Error: There was no comment detected! Please follow the instructions at Template:AfC comment. Though I am 100% sure this topic is Notable and this article can be published, it needs to be properly Referenced. Right now you have some mentions of books written about KHHfC; that's fine, but what we also need is WP:Footnoting. For example, where you say was founded by Reverend Charles Albert Dickinson - says who? Ideally you should have a footnote there, something like "John Smith. The Happy Hattin Home. Acme Press, 1948. Pg 23". If you check GoogleBooks there are scads of books about this topic, and note you can automatically turn gBooks URLs into Wikipedia footnotes using http://reftags.appspot.com . Take a look at gBooks, make sure the major claims in the article have proper footnotes, and you'll be set. While looking at gBooks, if you see any illustrations of the Homes that pre-date 1923, you can copy them and upload them to Wikipedia or WikiCommons since pre-1923 is Public Domain. Illustrations would be great to have! But sources first, we can publish, and then we have time to help you with Images. You can check with Wikipedia:Teahouse/Questions if you'd like further advice from volunteer mentors. MatthewVanitas (talk) 20:08, 25 October 2012 (UTC)

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Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! gwickwire | Leave a message 00:01, 3 November 2012 (UTC)

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