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Hello.

One thing you'll need to learn if you're going to create Wikipedia articles is that such phrasing as

Let X0 and X1 be sets......

is an inappropriate way to start an article. At the very least, you need to tell the lay (non-mathematician) reader that mathematics is what the article is about. Often that is accomplished by saying

In number theory, Xmith's theorem is a result that....

or

In geometry, Xmith's theorem, named after John Xmith, .....

or

In algebra,....

etc. But "In category theory," or "In topology," is not appropriate since non-mathematicians might not realize what those are. Sometimes such a phrase is not needed. For example, if the title is fundamental theorem of algebra, then the title already accomplishes that task. Michael Hardy (talk) 02:19, 2 August 2011 (UTC)Reply

Hi. Thanks for suggestion. I've edited "Induced topology". --Beroal (talk) 15:44, 4 August 2011 (UTC)Reply

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