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Your submission at Articles for creation: Battle of Hashidayama (May 12)

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Battle of Hashidayama (May 13)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Shadow311 was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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Shadow311 (talk) 20:53, 13 May 2024 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Battle of Kinugasa Castle (May 20)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Ratnahastin was:  The comment the reviewer left was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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Ratnahastin (talk) 03:40, 20 May 2024 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Battle of Hashidayama (July 28)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by AlphaBetaGamma was:  The comment the reviewer left was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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ABG (Talk/Report any mistakes here) 13:28, 28 July 2024 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Battle of Hashidayama has been accepted

Battle of Hashidayama, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.

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Utopes _{(talk / cont)} 13:57, 14 August 2024 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:Battle of Kinugasa Castle has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Battle of Kinugasa Castle. Thanks! Utopes _{(talk / cont)} 14:47, 14 August 2024 (UTC)

Thank you so much for your help! I'll begin fixing it later once i have time. Thanks again! BeamLSB (talk) 15:31, 14 August 2024 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Battle of Kinugasa Castle (August 14)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Utopes was:  The comment the reviewer left was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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Utopes _{(talk / cont)} 22:38, 14 August 2024 (UTC)

(Copied from draft): Actually, I'd wager the "89-year-old Miura Yoshiaki" aspect is fixed; I just combined the important bits from each sentence, which saves some space on the page. Still unsure what to do with the chronology and organization. only the names relevant to the overarching context of the battle should be included; it is confusing to namedrop individuals who don't appear anywhere else in the text, especially without a source / wikilink / existing article to refer to. Utopes _{(talk / cont)} 22:42, 14 August 2024 (UTC)

Thank you for editing a few of the problems in the article, i feel like for now i dont have really much to change or add now that you've edited the biggest issues. I see the problem with Azuma Kagami being a source i used for most of this, but thats because theres only 2 (as far as i know) primary sources about this battle and one (Heike Monogatari) barely touches upon it. I did add some secondary sources to the sources section but they also mostly use the Azuma Kagami as reference. It's really difficult to find sources about this war as a whole especially these smaller battles (much less in English, thats why all my sources except the Heike Monogatari are in Japanese). BeamLSB (talk) 09:50, 15 August 2024 (UTC)

Can't thank you enough for all the edits you made on the page, the page looks way better and more readable now, maybe i'll resubmit it later. BeamLSB (talk) 13:52, 16 August 2024 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Battle of Kinugasa Castle has been accepted

Battle of Kinugasa Castle, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.

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Utopes _{(talk / cont)} 16:32, 17 August 2024 (UTC)

Thanks for reviewing this page too! I will soon begin on other Genpei War battles that arent in engwiki yet now that im done with Hashidayama and Kinugasa. BeamLSB (talk) 19:50, 17 August 2024 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Battle of Ichihara has been accepted

Battle of Ichihara, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.

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Utopes _{(talk / cont)} 22:57, 23 August 2024 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Battle of Dulu (October 30)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by KylieTastic were: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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KylieTastic (talk) 19:39, 30 October 2024 (UTC)