Antonvip85

The Order of Sin Eaters moved to draftspace

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An article you recently created, The Order of Sin Eaters, does not have enough sources and citations as written to remain published. It needs more citations from reliable, independent sources. (?) Information that can't be referenced should be removed (verifiability is of central importance on Wikipedia). I've moved your draft to draftspace (with a prefix of "Draft:" before the article title) where you can incubate the article with minimal disruption. When you feel the article meets Wikipedia's general notability guideline and thus is ready for mainspace, please click on the "Submit your draft for review!" button at the top of the page. John B123 (talk) 19:42, 20 August 2020 (UTC)Reply

Your submission at Articles for creation: The Order of Sin Eaters (October 23)

Latest comment: 3 years ago2 comments1 person in discussion

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by ReaderofthePack were:

This submission reads more like an essay than an encyclopedia article. Submissions should summarise information in secondary, reliable sources and not contain opinions or original research. Please write about the topic from a neutral point of view in an encyclopedic manner.

Thank you for your submission, but the subject of this article already exists in Wikipedia. You can find it and improve it at The Order of Sin Eaters instead.

The comment the reviewer left was:

This already exists, more or less, at the article on the topic of sin eaters. This is also written a bit too casually for Wikipedia, as you should avoid terms like "we" and only use third person. (WP:YOU) You should also avoid vague descriptions like "kind of a big religious and philosophic trend" since it's imprecise and also too casual. It can also be perceived as original research in a way as well, particularly since this is very light on sourcing. Keep in mind that we can only summarize what others have explicitly written on the topic.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:The Order of Sin Eaters and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:The Order of Sin Eaters, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "{{Db-g7}}" at the top of the draft text and click the blue "publish changes" button to save this edit.
If you do not make any further changes to your draft, in 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
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ReaderofthePack(formerly Tokyogirl79) (｡◕‿◕｡) 05:28, 23 October 2020 (UTC)Reply

Hello, Antonvip85! Having an article declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! ReaderofthePack(formerly Tokyogirl79) (｡◕‿◕｡) 05:28, 23 October 2020 (UTC)Reply

Concern regarding Draft:The Order of Sin Eaters

Latest comment: 3 years ago1 comment1 person in discussion

Hello, Antonvip85. This is a bot-delivered message letting you know that Draft:The Order of Sin Eaters, a page you created, has not been edited in at least 5 months. Draft space is not an indefinite storage location for content that is not appropriate for article space.

If your submission is not edited soon, it could be nominated for deletion under CSD G13. If you would like to attempt to save it, you will need to improve it. You may request userfication of the content if it meets requirements.

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 12:01, 31 March 2021 (UTC)Reply

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