Angelariedle

Your submission at Articles for creation: Gerry Murphy (business person) (December 29)

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Onel5969 (talk) 15:38, 29 December 2014 (UTC)

Hello! Angelariedle, I noticed your article was declined at Articles for Creation, and that can be disappointing. If you are wondering or curious about why your article submission was declined please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Onel5969 (talk) 15:38, 29 December 2014 (UTC)

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Thank you for introducing yourself and contributing to Wikipedia! If you have any questions feel free to drop me a line at my talk page. Happy Editing! ~ Anastasia [Missionedit] (talk) 16:51, 14 January 2015 (UTC)

Thanks so much for getting in touch. I'd really love to get some opinions on an article I'm working on. I have it saved on my Sandbox: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Angelariedle/sandbox. Before I submit it for approval it would be great to get feedback as I'm quite new to Wikipedia. Angelariedle (talk) 18:58, 18 January 2015 (UTC)

You're welcome, Angelariedle! I have few suggestions for your article:

• The lead section could use a little beefing up. What main company(s) is he known for working at/directing? What awards has he received? His most famous work? Basically, in the lead section you want to summarize why he is notable (and hence why he is on Wikipedia).

• The first letter of all the words in headings should not be capitalized, but instead be written like you would write a sentence (eg. "Community service" not "Community Service")

• There really shouldn't be a list of "Related articles" at the bottom. Try to either incorporate these like the other references or maybe include a "General references" section at the bottom instead.

• Don't cite Wikipedia on Wikipedia :) This creates a cross-reference web and causes Wikipedia to become unreliable. Instead, if you want to link to a Wikipedia article in an article, use internal links. This is an example of an internal link to the Wikipedia page about apples: Apples are delicious. To make an internal link, put double brackets around the name of the article: [[apple]]. It will show up like this: apple.

I think that's enough to get you started. I hope I didn't overload you with information :) Just take it slowly and you'll get all the kinks worked out eventually. Don't hesitate to ask if you have any more questions, or if you didn't understand what I said. Happy editing! ~ Anastasia [Missionedit] (talk) 21:34, 19 January 2015 (UTC)

Thanks so much Anastasia! That is all great advice and very achievable. I really appreciate all your assistanceAngelariedle (talk) 16:57, 25 January 2015 (UTC)

Getting approval for article

Hi Anastasia. Thanks again for all your help. Could I be cheeky and ask if you think my article is ready to be submitted for approval. I'm excited to resubmit it as I've made the changes that you suggest, but at the same time want to get it right. Many thanks, AngelaAngelariedle (talk) 20:09, 26 January 2015 (UTC)

Nice job ;) Looks decent to me. Why don't you submit and see what the reviewer has to say about it? ~ Anastasia [Missionedit] (talk) 01:43, 27 January 2015 (UTC)

Thank you so much Anastasia! I'm so grateful for all your help :) Here goes!Angelariedle (talk) 11:34, 27 January 2015 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Gerry Murphy (business person) (February 16)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Samuell1616 was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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One life to live (talk) 07:15, 16 February 2015 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Gerry Murphy (business person) (March 20)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Kikichugirl was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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— kikichugirl ^oh hello! 05:56, 20 March 2015 (UTC)

Your draft article, Draft:Gerry Murphy (business person)

Hello, Angelariedle. It has been over six months since you last edited your Articles for Creation draft article submission, "Gerry Murphy".

In accordance with our policy that Articles for Creation is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been nominated for deletion. If you plan on working on it further, or editing it to address the issues raised if it was declined, simply and remove the {{db-afc}} or {{db-g13}} code.

If your submission has already been deleted by the time you get there, and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion by following the instructions at this link. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. JMHamo (talk) 01:13, 4 October 2015 (UTC)