Your submission at Articles for creation: Camara Kambon (January 30) edit

 
Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by WikiDan61 was:  The comment the reviewer left was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.
WikiDan61ChatMe!ReadMe!! 20:08, 30 January 2024 (UTC)Reply
 
Hello, AnamSoul! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! WikiDan61ChatMe!ReadMe!! 20:08, 30 January 2024 (UTC)Reply

Your submission at Articles for creation: Camara Kambon (February 1) edit

 
Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Suitskvarts was:  The comment the reviewer left was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.
Suitskvarts (talk) 15:56, 1 February 2024 (UTC)Reply

Your submission at Articles for creation: Camara Kambon (February 19) edit

 
Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by TheChineseGroundnut was:  The comment the reviewer left was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.
TheChineseGroundnut (talk) 18:49, 19 February 2024 (UTC)Reply
Hi TheChineseGroundnut,
Thanks for your review. Here are my comments:
(a) The initial reason for decline (by WikiDan61, January 30) has been handled. I have done so much research and added better and varied sources since then. But of course, it takes work to find the articles in old Billboard magazines, etc.
(b) I asked Suitskvarts about their second decline on February 1, and got feedback regarding specific statements that had no proper reference. ALL these sentences have been removed.
Please give more guiding advice for how me and my fellow music researchers can move forward, to get the page about this composer published. I am happy to edit, add/remove, as suggested. AnamSoul (talk) 19:23, 19 February 2024 (UTC)Reply