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Your submission at Articles for creation: Ai Kihara-Hunt (January 15) edit

Latest comment: 4 months ago3 comments2 people in discussion

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Sungodtemple were:

The content of this submission includes material that does not meet Wikipedia's minimum standard for inline citations. Please cite your sources using footnotes. For instructions on how to do this, please see Referencing for beginners. Thank you.

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Essentially a CV. Wikipedia is an encyclopedia, not a place to promote yourself.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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Sungodtemple (talk • contribs) 04:35, 15 January 2024 (UTC)Reply

Hello, 304bayside! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Sungodtemple (talk • contribs) 04:35, 15 January 2024 (UTC)Reply

Thanks for the review. I don't see the clear difference between resume and an entry in an encyclopedia. I know her in person, so I can talk about her in detail, which I guess is something far from independent information. I looked at some entries, and they also look like their resume, containing their career and publications etc. Do you think you can give me some good examples?? 304bayside (talk) 15:00, 15 January 2024 (UTC)Reply

Your submission at Articles for creation: Ai Kihara-Hunt (January 15) edit

Latest comment: 4 months ago2 comments2 people in discussion

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Drmies was:

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Well, advertisement--it looks like someone copied a resume into draft space. User:304bayside, if the article is declined, please improve it rather than adding more resume material.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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Drmies (talk) 14:52, 15 January 2024 (UTC)Reply

Thanks for the review. I don't see the clear difference between resume and an entry in an encyclopedia. I know her in person, so I can talk about her in detail, which I guess is something far from independent information. I looked at some entries, and they also look like their resume, containing their career and publications etc. Do you think you can give me some good examples?? 304bayside (talk) 15:00, 15 January 2024 (UTC)Reply

Your submission at Articles for creation: Ai Kihara-Hunt (April 29) edit

Latest comment: 20 days ago1 comment1 person in discussion

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by ToadetteEdit was:

The content of this submission includes material that does not meet Wikipedia's minimum standard for inline citations. Please cite your sources using footnotes. For instructions on how to do this, please see Referencing for beginners. Thank you.

The comment the reviewer left was:

also excessive use of external links.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Ai Kihara-Hunt and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

Toadette^Edit! 09:00, 29 April 2024 (UTC)Reply

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