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LGBT rights in Indonesia edit
Hello IP editor. It's hard to conduct a conversation via edit summaries, so very briefly: Regarding your recent addition to the article, I removed it from the lead section or "lede", which is supposed to summarize the main points of the article. (See the guideline.) One of the two incidents was already mentioned in the article, the other not, so I reworked it a bit (including fixing the grammar), trimmed things, and moved them around. But it's still all covered in the article. Your first sentence made a claim that may well be true but would need to be sourced before including; otherwise it's original research. I'd be happy to discuss it further at Talk:LGBT rights in Indonesia; feel free to start a new discussion there. Thanks! RivertorchFIREWATER 15:21, 23 May 2017 (UTC)
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