Proposed alteration to sentence structure in second paragraph

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Can you change the following sentence 'The other site is called "The Lonely Tombstone," where a voyageur is buried who shot himself while taking his gun out of the canoe in 1865.' to 'The other site is "The Lonely Tombstone," where a voyageur, who shot himself while taking his gun out of the canoe in 1865, is buried."?112.213.221.14 (talk) 01:21, 20 October 2021 (UTC)Reply

October 2022

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  Hello, I'm ThePlatypusofDoom. I noticed that you added or changed content in an article, List of Australian bicycle brands and manufacturers, but you didn't provide a reliable source. It's been removed and archived in the page history for now, but if you'd like to include a citation and re-add it, please do so. You can have a look at referencing for beginners. If you think I made a mistake, you can leave me a message on my talk page. Thank you. ThePlatypusofDoom (talk) 03:18, 31 October 2022 (UTC)Reply

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  Please do not use styles that are nonstandard, unusual, inappropriate or difficult to understand in articles, as you did in Norfolk Island cuisine. There is a Manual of Style, and edits should not deliberately go against it without special reason. Thank you. LilianaUwU (talk / contribs) 03:03, 1 November 2022 (UTC)Reply