Hocking coined the term in response to the game Bioshock, which promotes the theme of self-interest through its gameplay while promoting the opposing theme of selflessness through its narrative, creating a violation of aesthetic distance that often pulls the player out of the game. (revision)
No. Sounds like OR at worst. --EpochFail (talk • contribs) 20:38, 6 October 2020 (UTC)
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Of the launch complexes built since 1950, only three remain active with two planned for future use. (revision)
The only artifacts known for Shepseskare's reign are several clay sealings from Abusir, where the king may have been buried, and two cylinder seals, according to the respected Czech Egyptologist Miroslav Verner. (revision)
Yes, "respected" should be deleted, but that's not a serious issue. (t · c) buidhe 12:56, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
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Letters have been credited to him that invited Jews to settle in his kingdom. (revision)
Neipperg's Austrian forces were then recalled from Silesia to defend Austria against the western invaders, abandoning Neisse after a sham siege in early November and leaving the whole of Silesia under Prussian control. (revision)
No, although it needs clarification (what is a sham siege?) (t · c) buidhe 12:56, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
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They are used mostly at microwave frequencies, where conventional components are difficult (or impossible) to implement. (revision)
Huskisson told Brandreth "You see I shall never live to make any return for your kindness. (revision)
No attributed statement (t · c) buidhe 12:56, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
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Due to the crowded nature of Rome at the time, Octavius was taken to his father's home village at Velletri to be raised. (revision)
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Nishat Bari of India Today called Pinto's role her "most substantial" one to that point. (revision)
No attributed opinion (t · c) buidhe 12:56, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
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It excluded Wigan, which was both in the Redcliffe-Maud area and in the eventual Greater Manchester (but had not been part of the 1958 act's review area).(revision)
On November 24, 2007, the Portland Winterhawks reclaimed the record with an impressive 20,372 stuffed animals coming from the 6,343 fans at the Memorial Coliseum on the 10th Annual Teddy Bear Toss Night. (revision)
Yes "impressive" needs to be removed. (t · c) buidhe 12:56, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
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Instead, it has been suggested that they form dual dwarf planets, following the highly-disputed re-classification of Pluto. (revision)
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One of its most famous games is Dokyusei, a pioneering ren'ai game, that has been sequelled, and turned into video and TV episodes. (revision)
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Moreover, despite a fall in extreme poverty during the 1990s, Guatemala’s dependency on exports and susceptibility to global price shocks such as the world coffee crisis and natural disasters such as the Tropical Storm Stan in 2005 has led to a subsequent increase of the poverty rate in 2004 and falling again in 2005. (revision)
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Many tweaks do work and much of the fun of the hobby is to "squeeze" even more performance out of an already good sounding component. (revision)
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Few species are found at higher elevations, with less than 10% of species having ranges above 2000 m (6500 ft) and almost none with ranges above 3000 m (10000 ft).. (revision)
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Meanwhile, Napoleon had launched an attack on the main army at the Austrian center.. (revision)
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The result was a novel without a focused starting point, which was seen as a modern perspective and critically well received. (revision)
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The 2/2nd Pioneer Battalion was initially divided up, with each company attached to a different brigade of the 7th Division. (revision)
On crime, the decline in New York criminal activity that began in Rudy Giuliani's tenure has continued. (revision)
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The Type-56 was discovered in enemy hands far more often than the original Russian-made AK-47s or AKMs. (revision)
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The Ananova news service was well known for its collection of unusual news stories, which it featured in its Quirkies section. (revision)
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Many American comics acknowledged Islam's deportation comedically, often mocking the United States government simultaneously. (revision)
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A revolutionary discovery of 20th century physics was the apparently random character of all physical processes that occur at microscopic scales and are governed by the laws of quantum mechanics. (revision)
