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In summary, my recommendations covered a few different aspects. I believe that the most important change to be made is making sure that the content in the Lead and Body line up with each other. I also suggested that a case study be added to the "Uses" section to show a real-world example of how questions related to zooarchaeology can be answered. Furthermore, it may be beneficial to seek out an additional source or two that is/are independent of the subject. Lastly, some minor changes can possibly be made to the images to compliment the article. I put a link to a textbook PDF in my peer review that may be useful to you. For further details, please see my peer review. Thank you and good luck with the rest of your article!