User:Mononomic/Ansel Adams Todo

What the heck is going on here?
Hi there: if you're not Mononomic, none of this will probably make any sense to you. I'm just making a to-do list for my upcoming work on the Ansel Adams article.

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Mine edit

  • Correct grammar and spelling, style
  • "Zone system", "Zone System", or "zone system"?Mono·nomic 21:49, 22 July 2010 (UTC)
  • Comply with MOS for lead sections, layout, jargon, words to avoid, fiction, and list incorporation.
  • Properly format refs
  • Add sources if necessary
  • Good images, with proper FURs if needed, image descriptions, all preferably free

Finetooth edit

From Wikipedia:Peer review/Ansel Adams/archive1 by User:Finetooth. Not directly quoted, but summarized.

  • Paraphrase instead of quotes, especially for short ones
  • Note explaining lack of images due to copyright restrictions
  • Justify fair use No more fair use pictures! —Mono·nomic 15:23, 20 March 2010 (UTC)
  • Move pictures around (see original)Mono·nomic 22:49, 13 March 2010 (UTC)
  • Cut down Career section
  • Maybe break up into "20s and 30s", "40s and 50s", "60s and later"
  • Rewrite lead at end of editing
  • Must mention youth, family, interest in music, publications, awards, legacy.
  • Convert to prose (per MOS) for lists in Awards, but not WorksMono·nomic 22:49, 13 March 2010 (UTC)
  • Em --> en dashes in notesMono·nomic 21:41, 13 March 2010 (UTC)
  • Alt textsMono·nomic 23:35, 13 March 2010 (UTC)
  • DisambiguateMono·nomic 21:45, 13 March 2010 (UTC)
  • Make sure I didn't miss anything from original list