The newer draft is coming out after this weekend. I'm working on the overall layout now to go over what I want the article to look like in general and than make corrections along the way. The direction of the article is to highlight the issue of student housing causing and exacerbating inequity on campuses specifically here in portage county. Sub categories will include data on and off campus housing, student housing provided by the university and comparing other areas, states and countries to it. Let me know what you think and I am more than willing to take any advice from you or the student aid for over all direction and corrections to help build the article.
Professor, When I did the draft I was under the impression it was supposed to be a very rough draft just get the basic information out and critique it daily from there with peer to peer reviews each week. I may have misunderstood that and I have another write up of it though may need to set up an appointment with you to further discuss specific details of the article and overall structure. I'll email you tonight to set a meeting for this week if not tomorrow after class.