Final Articles:
I edited 4 articles total. The exact text I added to each article is labeled and directly copied to the bottom of the sandbox, followed by all my sources. Each section contains a link to the actual article.
Response to peer review:
My feedback came from Angela and Rob, who pointed out two main elements: 1) I need to format my sources correctly, and 2) I need to change my quotations such that periods/commas are within the end quote. My next steps will be to proofread /change syntax according to the above two suggestions, and continue adding to my 3 articles, specifically choosing more sources found through the berkeley databases.
I plan to additionally linked Jose's page to Sophie's, the new article I am creating, as Jose reported heavily on Sophie Cruz.
I have created the beginning of the Sophia Cruz page, accessible here: Sophie Cruz
-Kelly 9/9/2016
Peer review:
Hey it's Angela. I think you are in great shape- I have very few edits. Nice job. You need to make sure your citations are all cited in the appropriate wikipedia style - let us know if you need help with that. One small grammatical error: punctuation goes after quotation marks. (So “Papa Rescate DAPA”, should read “Papa Rescate DAPA,”). Other than that, your contributions add a lot to the pieces and are written very well in the academic style and with the objectivity we are looking for. Nice job!
-Angela
Article: Jorge Ramos (news anchor)
New Source 4: http://www.npr.org/2016/10/21/498804694/to-make-hate-rising-jorge-ramos-spent-time-with-hate-groups
New Source 5: http://latinousa.org/2016/10/20/new-jorge-ramos-documentary-explores-hate-america/
Adding to last paragraph of section Career about press conference in Iowa:
Original - "At an August 25, 2015 news conference held in Dubuque, Iowa by Trump, Ramos, after attempting to question Trump about his immigration policies without being called on, was rebuffed by Trump. Security then escorted Ramos out of the conference."
New - "On August 25, 2015, Ramos attended a news conference held in Dubuque, Iowa by Trump. Prior to attending, Ramos studied previous Trump press conferences and discovered a pattern of Trump repetitively interjecting “excuse me” and calling on another reporter when asked a question opposing his beliefs (source 1). Due to this knowledge, Ramos refused to sit down and persistently continued questioning Trump about his immigration policies when rebuffed (source 1). Ramos insisted on his rights as a reporter and U.S. citizen to ask a question, prompting security to push him backwards out of the conference room (source 2)."
New - appending to the end of section Career:
"In 2016, Ramos began leveraging Facebook Live to stream raw footage taken on his phone to social media audiences, gaining 2.6 million views on his Iowa caucus videos and over 4 million on his reports during the New Hampshire primaries (source 3). For his documentary “Hate Rising”, Ramos met with various hate groups across the country including KKK members and neo-Nazis, along with Latino and Muslim victims (source 5). The film focuses on hate across America and the growing presence of hate organizations since the onset of Trump’s campaign. “Hate Rising” aired on October 23, 2016 on Univision and Fusion (source 4)."
Generally, the Career section could used some reorganizing, as it is somewhat chronologically ordered but with exceptions, leading to an overall confusing structure.
Article: Sophie Cruz (new article)
New Source 6: http://www.immigrationvoter.com/video-sophie
New Source 8: https://presidentialopenquestions.com/questions/7636/vote/
New Source 9: http://americasvoice.org/blog/why-weve-never-forgotten-little-sophie-cruz/
New Source 10: https://www.theguardian.com/world/2015/sep/23/pope-francis-sophie-cruz-letter-immigration
New Source 11: https://img.washingtonpost.com/rf/image_908w/2010-2019/Wires/Images/2015-09-23/AP/ADDITION_US_Pope_Francis-0da00.jpg
New Source 12: http://www.slate.com/content/dam/slate/blogs/the_slatest/2015/09/150924_SLATEST_popegirl.jpg.CROP.promo-xlarge2.jpg
Sophie Cruz grew to national fame after being embraced by Pope Francis during a procession on National Mall in September 2015. At age five, she slipped through security barricades and was lifted up to the Pope’s motorcade. She handed the Pope a handwritten letter later discovered to be a plea for immigration reform (source 10). Sophie’s parents, Raul and Zoyla Cruz, are undocumented immigrants from Oaxaca, Mexico, and Sophie's personal fear of her parents’ deportation has made her one of the youngest voices in the immigration reform movement. Sophie wore a shirt embellished with the words “Papa Rescate DAPA”, urging the Pope to support the Deferred Action for Parents of Americans act (source 9).
Sophie made a second splash upon posting on PresidentialOpenQuestions.com, a forum allowing users to propose questions for the next presidential debate. Sophie's question asked Trump and Clinton what would happen to her if her parents were deported, and received over 37,000 votes (source 8).
Sophie additionally starred in a video "11 million Stories" on immigrationvoter.com in partnership with FWD.us, shedding light on the implications of national mass-deportation and the plight of children like her with undocumented parents (source 6).
She was invited to visited president Obama at the White House for a Cinco de Mayo celebration in 2016 (source 7).
Source 12 will be the bio photo for her page, source 11 is an iconic image of her interaction with the Pope.
Article: Minuteman Project
New Source 13: http://spx.sagepub.com/content/early/2015/08/03/0731121414557700.full.pdf
New Source 14: http://eds.a.ebscohost.com/eds/pdfviewer/pdfviewer?sid=fec553a1-a3ce-4f56-9676-c3fb2a3496f6%40sessionmgr4010&vid=1&hid=4105
New Source 15: http://eds.a.ebscohost.com/eds/pdfviewer/pdfviewer?sid=b1d52b05-45c0-4f3a-ab8f-84b5ed53ff4a%40sessionmgr4009&vid=1&hid=4105
Appended to end of lead:
"In addition to border watch, the project created a political action committee lobbying for representatives supporting anti-immigration and border security issues. Members believe government officials have failed to protect the country from foreign enemy invasion (source 14)."
Appending to beginning of History:
"In early 2005, Gilchrist and Simcox rallied over 1,200 volunteers to carry out the first border watch. For one month, activists guarded the 23 mile Arizona-Mexico border, keeping count of the number of migrants approaching, reporting their presence and scaring them away from crossing through this stretch. Many activist came from Utah, and soon after joined forces with local groups to form the Utah Minuteman Project (UMP), which focused on raising pubic awareness regarding the “threat of immigration” through local media and public debates (source 13)."
Demographics and sentiment information, not sure where to add this yet:
"The Minutemen tends towards middle-aged and older individuals, many of who are retired. Members strongly support building a solid wall and placing additional border patrol agents or involving the military to curb free movement across the US-Mexico border. Roughly half of the members strongly oppose amnesty and a guest worker program, and an overwhelming number oppose sending funds to Mexico to improve infrastructure (source 15)."
Steve Case: Created section 'Work with Immigration Reform' edit
Link: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Steve_Case
Case is also an avid advocate for comprehensive immigration reform, arguing the easing restraints on immigration is necessary for America's future entrepreneurial economy. [1] He particularly emphasizes the impact reform would have on recent engineering graduates and the tech sector. Case contends that making it easier for foreign students educated in America to stay post graduation is vital to wining the war for talent, given the sheer high demand for engineers and entrepreneurs and current visa rules preventing tech companies from hiring the best foreign talent. [2][3] He argues not only for reforming the H-1B visa program, but additionally implementing a Startup Visa program that welcomes immigrant entrepreneurs with proven ideas to launch their startups in the United States. [4] Case traditionally stays out of politics, quietly building relationships with both Democrats and Republicans. [5] He made an exception to remaining non-partisan by endorsing Hilary Clinton for the 2016 presidency, however, fueled by concern that Donald Trump's strict immigration policies would result in loss of jobs as many Fortune 500 companies were founded by immigrants or their children. [6]
Jorge Ramos: Edits added to section 'Career' edit
Link: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Jorge_Ramos_(news_anchor)
On August 25, 2015, Ramos attended a news conference held in Dubuque, Iowa by Trump. Prior to attending, Ramos studied previous Trump press conferences and discovered a pattern of Trump repetitively interjecting “excuse me” and calling on another reporter when asked a question opposing his beliefs. Due to this knowledge, Ramos refused to sit down and persistently continued questioning Trump about his immigration policies when rebuffed. [7] Ramos insisted on his rights as a reporter and United States citizen to ask a question, prompting security to push him backwards out of the conference room.[8]
The press conference incident inspired Ramos to create his documentary “Hate Rising” focused on hate across the country, which aired October 23, 2016 on Univision and Fusion. [9] [10] He noted the growing presence of hate organizations since the onset of Trump’s campaign, as the rhetoric during the election cycle empowered ideas typically limited to private gatherings to become mainstream. [11] In preparation for the documentary, Ramos met with various hate groups across the country including Ku Klux Klan members and neo-Nazis, along with Latino and Muslim victims. [12] His journey lasted nine months, often placing himself in danger as an immigrant and Mexican-American man. [13] In order to gain face time with members of white supremacist groups, Ramos partnered with director Catherine Bambini, an American who the groups were under the impression they would be speaking to, and only right before the interview started did Ramos sit down to ask questions. [14]
In 2016, Ramos began leveraging Facebook Live to stream raw footage taken on his phone to social media audiences, gaining 2.6 million views on his Iowa caucus videos and over four million on his reports during the New Hampshire primaries. [15]
Sophie Cruz: New Article I Created edit
Link: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sophie_Cruz
Sophie Cruz became famous in the United States of America after being embraced by Pope Francis during a procession on National Mall in September 2015. Aged five, she slipped through security barricades and was lifted up to the Pope’s motorcade. She handed the Pope a handwritten letter later discovered to be a plea for immigration reform. [16] Sophie’s parents, Raul and Zoyla Cruz, are undocumented immigrants from Oaxaca in Mexico, and Sophie's personal fear of her parents’ deportation has made her one of the youngest voices in the immigration reform movement. She came as an activist with a group of 19 adults and six children from La Hermandad Mexicana Transnacional, a Los Angeles based immigration advocacy organization. [17] Despite the spontaneous appearance of the act, the group had spent over a year planning for Sophie's stunt, hoping that the face of a child would help the campaign.[18] Sophie wore a shirt embellished with the words “Papa Rescate DAPA," urging the Pope to support the Deferred Action for Parents of Americans act. [19] Her message resonated in the speech Pope Francis addressed to a joint meeting of the United States Congress the next day, encouraging greater openness for immigrants and refugees. [20]
Sophie made a second splash upon posting on PresidentialOpenQuestions.com, a forum allowing users to propose questions for the next presidential debate. Sophie's question asked Donald Trump and Hillary Clinton what would happen to her if her parents were deported, and received over 37,000 votes. [21] Sophie's question ranked 20th the night before the second debate, high enough to be posed by debate moderators Martha Raddatz or Anderson Cooper, but was ultimately not asked. [22]
Sophie was invited to visit President Obama at the White House for a Cinco de Mayo celebration in 2016. Because her parents were undocumented, they were not able to enter the White House, and instead Sophie was accompanied by Alida Garcia from FWD.us and filmmaker Paola Mendoza. [23] Medoza had previously directed a short video "Free Like the Birds" starring Sophie and her family that debuted in the Tribeca Film Festival. [24] The video can be found on Mendoza's Vimeo, and gives a glimpse into Sophie's home and thoughts. [25] Sophie also starred in a video "11 million Stories" on immigrationvoter.com in partnership with FWD.us, shedding light on the implications of national mass-deportation and the plight of children like her with undocumented parents. [26]
Minutemen Project: Edits to 3 sections edit
Link: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Minuteman_Project
Addition to Lead edit
In addition to border watching, the project created a political action committee lobbying for representatives supporting anti-immigration and border security issues. Members believe government officials have failed to protect the country from foreign enemy invasion. [27] They strongly support building a wall and placing additional border patrol agents or involving the military to curb free movement across the Mexico-United States border. Roughly half of the members strongly oppose amnesty and a guest worker program, and an overwhelming number oppose sending funds to Mexico to improve infrastructure. [28]
Addition to 'History': First border watch edit
In early 2005, Gilchrist and Simcox rallied over 1,200 volunteers to carry out the first border watch. For one month, activists guarded the 23 mile Arizona-Mexico border, keeping count of the number of migrants approaching, reporting their presence, and scaring them away from crossing through this stretch. Many activist came from Utah, and soon after joined forces with local groups to form the Utah Minuteman Project (UMP), which focused on raising pubic awareness regarding the “threat of immigration” through local media and public debates. [29]
Addition to 'Support': 2016 elections edit
Discussions during the 2016 presidential election regarding building a wall and mass deportation directly aligned with the project's missions. Gilchrist stated that he felt his goals were reaffirmed and accomplished upon observing such widespread awareness surrounding immigration issues. [30] He initially supported Ted Cruz for president, who openly criticized Barack Obama's policy of amnesty and was a consistent opponents against Obama's push for immigration reform. [31]
Notes edit
- ^ Primack, Dan (12 October 2013). "Steve Case: Still 'optimistic' on immigration reform". Fortune. Retrieved 20 November 2016.
- ^ Summers, Nick (26 August 2013). "Steve Case's Second Life". Bloomberg Businessweek (4343): 52–57. Retrieved 20 November 2016.
- ^ Savitz, Eric (13 September 2012). "Q&A: Steve Case On Startups, Living Social, Zipcar And More". EBSCOhost. Fortune. Retrieved 20 November 2016.
- ^ Case, Steve (3 August 2016). "Immigration must be considered an opportunity for America, not a problem". Vox Media, Inc. Recode. Retrieved 20 November 2016.
- ^ Case, Steve (28 September 2016). "Steve Case: Why I'm voting for Hillary Clinton". The Washington Post. Retrieved 20 November 2016.
- ^ Addady, Michael (29 September 2016). "AOL Founder Steve Case Has 4 Reasons Why He's Voting for Hillary Clinton". Fortune. Retrieved 20 November 2016.
- ^ "Univision's Jorge Ramos Discusses Journalism And That Donald Trump Press Conference". Literature Resource Center. National Public Radio. 5 October 2015. Retrieved 20 November 2016.
- ^ Finnegan, William. "The Man Who Wouldn't Sit Down". No. 30. Literature Resource Center. The New Yorker. Retrieved 20 November 2016.
- ^ "To Make 'Hate Rising,' Jorge Ramos Spent Time With Hate Groups". National Public Radio. Morning Edition. 21 October 2016. Retrieved 20 November 2016.
- ^ Ramos, Jorge. "Hate Rising with Jorge Ramos". YouTube. Fusion. Retrieved 20 November 2016.
- ^ Taylor, Jared (28 October 2016). "Hate Rising with Jorge Ramos". Fusion. American Renaissance. Retrieved 20 November 2016.
- ^ Llamoca, Janice (20 October 2016). "New Jorge Ramos Documentary Explores Hate in America". Futuro Media Group. Latino USA. Retrieved 20 November 2016.
- ^ Gabe, Ortiz. ""Hate Rising": Jorge Ramos Examines The Resurgence Of Hate Groups During The Rise Of Trump". America's Voice. Retrieved 20 November 2016.
- ^ Moreno, Carolina (22 October 2016). "Jorge Ramos Exposes Hate Groups' Rise In The Age Of Trump". The Huffington Post. Retrieved 20 November 2016.
- ^ [go.galegroup.com/ps/i.do?p=LitRC&sw=w&u=ucberkeley&v=2.1&id=GALE%7CA444367970&it=r&asid=0acda41c19bdce5fafcc26ad04510956 "Univision's Ramos Seeks New Audiences On Facebook -- And Draws Millions"]. Literature Resource Center. National Public Radio. 22 February 2016. Retrieved 20 November 2016.
{{cite news}}: Check|url=value (help) - ^ Gambino, Lauren (23 September 2015). "Francis and Sophie's secret: girl who hugged pope delivers immigration plea". Guardian News and Media Limited. The Guardian.
- ^ Witte, Brian (23 September 2015). "Little Girl Is Star of Papal Parade". U.S. News & World Report L.P. UW News. Retrieved 20 November 2016.
- ^ Parry, Ryan; Sanchez, Matt (26 September 2015). "Little girl who begged Pope Francis to let her illegal immigrant parents stay in the U.S. is going to Philadelphia to see him AGAIN". Daily Mail. Retrieved 20 November 2016.
- ^ Ortiz, Gabe. "Why We've Never Forgotten Little Sophie Cruz". America's Voice. America's Voice. Retrieved 10 November 2016.
- ^ Hing, Julianne (24 September 2015). "Pope Francis Delivers Sophie Cruz's Message to Congress". The Nation. Retrieved 20 November 2016.
- ^ Cruz, Sophie. "If you deport my parents, what happens to me?". Open Debate Coalition. Retrieved 10 November 2016.
- ^ Greenwood, Max (8 October 2016). "This 6-Year-Old's Question Could Be Donald Trump's Toughest Yet". TheHuffingtonPost.com, Inc. The Huffington Post. Retrieved 20 November 2016.
- ^ Hernández, Arelis (5 May 2016). "The girl who hugged the pope is at the White House. Her parents, who are undocumented, can't join her". The Washington Post. Retrieved 10 November 2016.
- ^ Ortiz, Gabe. "Sophie Cruz Makes Her Tribeca Film Festival Debut In "Free Like The Birds"". America's Voice. Retrieved 20 November 2016.
- ^ Mendoza, Paola. "FREE LIKE THE BIRDS". Vimeo. Retrieved 20 November 2016.
- ^ "11 Million Stories: Sophie, The Truth of Mass Deportation". Immigration Voter. Retrieved 10 November 2016.
- ^ Stewart, Julie; Bendall, Michele (2014). "Jobs, Flags, and Laws: How Interests, Culture, and Values Explain Recruitment into the Utah Minuteman Project" (PDF). Sociological Perspectives: 1–22. Retrieved 20 November 2016.
- ^ McCarty, Justin (1 May 2007). "The Volunteer Border Patrol: The Inevitable Disaster of the Minuteman Project". Iowa Law Review. 92 (4): 1459–1492. Retrieved 20 November 2016.
- ^ Cabrera, Luis; Glavac, Sonya (4 April 2010). "Minutemen and Desert Samaritans: Mapping the Attitudes of Activists on the United States' Immigration Front Lines". Journal of Ethnic and Migration Studies. 36 (4): 673 695. Retrieved 20 November 2016.
- ^ Hoffman, Meredith (22 March 2016). "Whatever Happened to Arizona's Minutemen?". Vice. Retrieved 20 November 2016.
- ^ Larson, Leslie (25 March 2015). "Anti-immigration Minuteman Project leader supports Ted Cruz". Business Insider. Retrieved 20 November 2016.
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