- The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by BlueMoonset (talk) 11:54, 10 July 2012 (UTC)
Zuster Theresia edit
- ... that the drama Zuster Theresia, written by a man known for comedy, featured a nun, attempted suicide, and polygamy?
- ALT1:... that the drama Sister Theresia, written by a man known for comedy, featured a nun, attempted suicide, and polygamy?
- Reviewed: Ortrun Enderlein
Created/expanded by Crisco 1492 (talk). Self nom at 01:04, 5 July 2012 (UTC)
New enough and long enough at time of nomination. Fully sourced where required by WP:MOS. QPQ done. Hook is properly formatted. Article is neutral enough.
Offline sources support article facts and were not plagiarised.
Cannot find word suicide or polygamy in the article. Hook does not appear to be supported by text? --LauraHale (talk) 01:20, 5 July 2012 (UTC)
Explain where hook is supported by text or make it more clear in the article or propose althook. --LauraHale (talk) 01:20, 5 July 2012 (UTC)
- Article uses "kill herself" for suicide, and explains that Henk was married to both Daisy and Flora at the same time (in a word, polygamy). I can cite both plot points to an online source if you want. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 01:24, 5 July 2012 (UTC)
- Sourcing wasn't the issue because the manual of style of doesn't require it for plots. More of an issue of hook not being obvious and requiring thinking. (There are plenty of ways to kill yourself with out it being suicide.) If it could be made obvious for that by saying something like intentionally kill herself? --LauraHale (talk) 01:34, 5 July 2012 (UTC)
- Made more explicit. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 01:38, 5 July 2012 (UTC)
- Sourcing wasn't the issue because the manual of style of doesn't require it for plots. More of an issue of hook not being obvious and requiring thinking. (There are plenty of ways to kill yourself with out it being suicide.) If it could be made obvious for that by saying something like intentionally kill herself? --LauraHale (talk) 01:34, 5 July 2012 (UTC)
Good to go. --LauraHale (talk) 01:42, 5 July 2012 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review! — Crisco 1492 (talk) 02:43, 5 July 2012 (UTC)