Template:Did you know nominations/Zou Jiahua

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The result was: promoted by Hawkeye7 (talk) 23:12, 15 July 2013 (UTC)

Zou Jiahua edit

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... ... that Zou Jiahua served as Vice Premier of China for seven years?

Moved to mainspace by Williamt.Estates (talk). Nominated by 069952497a (talk) at 12:36, 13 July 2013 (UTC).

I am nominating someone else's article; thus I do not have to do the QPQ. 069952497a (U-T-C-E) 12:37, 13 July 2013 (UTC)

Could do with better writing quality, but looks good. ☯ Bonkers The Clown \(^_^)/ Nonsensical Babble ☯ 05:10, 14 July 2013 (UTC)

Thank you for the review. 069952497a (U-T-C-E) 12:06, 14 July 2013 (UTC)

How about ALT1: ... that Zou Jiahua served as Vice Premier of China for eight years?

I was truly surprised that such a high-ranking official did not have an article until now. I think Vice Premier is a title that's easier for English readers to grasp that Politburo member. Good article overall, but needs citation for the "family" section, especially the bit about his brother's murder. -Zanhe (talk) 18:58, 15 July 2013 (UTC)

I've added those references, and on second thought ALT1 is better. 069952497a (U-T-C-E) 19:17, 15 July 2013 (UTC)

I have replaced the existing hook with ALT1. Just for reference, the original hook was:

... ~~that Zou Jiahua was a member of the 14th Politburo of the Communist Party of China, from 1992 to 1997?~~ 069952497a (U-T-C-E) 19:19, 15 July 2013 (UTC)

Thanks. Good to go. -Zanhe (talk) 19:59, 15 July 2013 (UTC)