- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:17, 27 May 2018 (UTC)
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Yurika Endō edit
... that while in high school, Yurika Endō was part of a band that performed covers of anime music?Source: [1] "遠藤：アニソンに興味を持ち始めたことも、周りにアニメ好きな友達が集まったからだと思います。バンドは幾つかやっていましたが、そのひとつがアニソンのコピーをやろうという主旨で集まったバンドで。その子たちとアニメの話をしたり、あのシーン良かったね、あの曲良かったよねって話し合うのが純粋に楽しくて、アニメに対する興味も大きくなったんじゃないかと思います。あの時期がなかったら、今こうしてインタビューしてもらうようなこともなかったんじゃないかと思いますね。"ALT1:... that "Monochrome Overdrive", the debut single of Japanese voice actress and singer Yurika Endō, was written and composed by Hisashi, the lead guitarist of the band Glay?Source: VIDEO: Rookie Voice Actress Yurika Endo's Solo Debut Song "Monochrome Overdrive" PV
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/El Tráfico
- Comment: Requesting a special occasion hook date for June 1, the date of her final concert before her retirement from the entertainment industry.
In addition, the article is currently pending a history merge from my userspace draft, as the expansion content came from said draft.
5x expanded by Narutolovehinata5 (talk). Self-nominated at 00:30, 20 April 2018 (UTC).
5x expanded, in time, long enough, sourced, no apparent copyvios, QPQ done. Narutolovehinata5, since you want this to run on the date of her retirement, wouldn't a hook about that be more germane? Especially since she'll be retiring at the age of 23, which is pretty interesting. --Usernameunique (talk) 07:53, 20 April 2018 (UTC)
- @Usernameunique: I see. How would a hook specifically about her retirement work? I'm fine with such a suggestion but I'm not sure how it would work, and in any case I'm not sure if such a hook would work in the first place because WP:BLP. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 08:36, 20 April 2018 (UTC)
- @Narutolovehinata5:
- ALT2:
... that 23-year-old Japanese voice actress and singer Yurika Endō is retiring today?--Usernameunique (talk) 08:43, 20 April 2018 (UTC)
@Usernameunique: I suppose that works, but I guess a different reviewer needs to check if ALT2 is okay. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 08:47, 20 April 2018 (UTC)
- @Narutolovehinata5 and Usernameunique: ALT2 fulfills the criteria, and is more relevant than ALT1. If you want to elaborate that she is retiring for health reasons, ping me and I'll look at that, but it works as is, too.--Alexandra IDVtalk 12:12, 20 April 2018 (UTC)
- @Alexandra IDV and Usernameunique: How about:
- ALT3 ... that due to health reasons, 23-year-old Japanese voice actress and singer Yurika Endō is retiring after a solo concert today?
ALT4 ... that while in high school, Japanese voice actress and singer Yurika Endō, who is retiring today, was part of a band that performed covers of anime music?
- Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 12:16, 20 April 2018 (UTC)
- ALT3 works. ALT4 is unfocused and telling two things (retirement and being in a cover band) at the same time ("make it 'hooky', that is, short, punchy, catchy").--Alexandra IDVtalk 12:23, 20 April 2018 (UTC)
- @Narutolovehinata5 and Usernameunique:
- @Usernameunique: I see. How would a hook specifically about her retirement work? I'm fine with such a suggestion but I'm not sure how it would work, and in any case I'm not sure if such a hook would work in the first place because WP:BLP. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 08:36, 20 April 2018 (UTC)
Sounds good to me. Alexandra IDV, do you mind giving ALT3 an official review and tick, since it contains elements I suggested? Thanks, --Usernameunique (talk) 23:31, 20 April 2018 (UTC)
As mentioned above, the article meets the DYK criteria, and I approve ALT3 as interesting and sourced.--Alexandra IDVtalk 00:32, 21 April 2018 (UTC)
