- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Hawkeye7 (talk) 02:00, 3 August 2014 (UTC)
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Xenia Field edit
- ... that Xenia Field was a magistrate who was interested in prison reform and set up a charitable foundation to help The Salvation Army establish a bail hostel?
- ALT1 ... that magistrate and prison reformer Xenia Field set up a charitable foundation to help The Salvation Army establish a bail hostel?
- Reviewed: Not a self-nom, no QPQ required
- Comment: Created today, over 1600 characters readable prose at present by my count
Created by Pigsonthewing (talk). Nominated by Montanabw (talk) at 23:00, 29 July 2014 (UTC).
New enough. Long enough. No QPQ needed. Article relies heavily on one source, but it is a WP:RS, and widely available to anyone with a British public membership. Hook is cited, and checks out with the ref. All paras cited. Dup detector reveals no close paraphrasing or copyvios. NPOV. ALT1 added - just a shorter reworded version of the original hook. Edwardx (talk) 13:25, 2 August 2014 (UTC)
That Field set up a foundation, and that it helped the Salvation Army, is true, but that the foundation was set up to do so is synthesis. I suggest ALT2 = "that Xenia Field helped to establish the first bail hostel in Britain?". Andy Mabbett (Pigsonthewing); Talk to Andy; Andy's edits 16:04, 2 August 2014 (UTC)
- Well spotted. I'm happy to sign off on ALT2. Should we link to bail hostel, as it may be an unfamiliar concept, even if the article on the subject is far from ideal? Edwardx (talk) 23:13, 2 August 2014 (UTC)