Template:Did you know nominations/Walter A. Groves

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The result was: promoted by Bruxton talk 18:43, 9 December 2023 (UTC)

Walter A. Groves

Groves in 1957
Groves in 1957

Created by PCN02WPS (talk). Self-nominated at 19:44, 30 October 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Walter A. Groves; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.

  • This isn't a full review, but I'm wondering if a stronger hook can be found. The hook presented here seems like a fairly common work-life happening. Stefen Towers among the rest! GabGruntwerk 22:03, 31 October 2023 (UTC)
  • The ALT1 hook is much more "interesting" (per an actual DYK requirement). I did a typo fix. Maybe it should say who invaded Iran without the reader having to hover over or click the link. Stefen Towers among the rest! GabGruntwerk 19:53, 2 November 2023 (UTC)
  • New enough, easily long enough, and well sourced. QPQ done. Earwig found no copying that I consider significant. ALT0 is not interesting, but ALT1 is. After a minor edit repeating a footnote from a later position, the hook sentence in the article is properly sourced. Good to go with ALT1. —David Eppstein (talk) 19:46, 23 November 2023 (UTC)