- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 20:20, 28 March 2015 (UTC)
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Vivian Pinn edit
- ... that Vivian Pinn (pictured), the former director of the NIH Office for Research on Women's Health, was the first African-American woman to head a pathology department in the United States?
Created by CGarn965 (talk). Nominated by Hildabast (talk) at 03:57, 19 March 2015 (UTC).
Created March 13 and nominated 6 days later. 11157 char long enough. "As a work of the U.S. federal government, the image is in the public domain." Hook 188 chars and verified in multiple sources. NPOV, though article could be more encyclopedic and less like an essay. But that criteria is outside DYK parameters. In line citations are mostly present. Have marked those that are missing. No close paraphrasing, though quite a few quotations. Well researched. Fascinating woman, thanks for the article! QPQ does not appear to be required nominator has not had 5 DYK noms. SusunW (talk) 23:22, 24 March 2015 (UTC)
- I went ahead and added the missing citations. --Rosekelleher (talk) 16:16, 25 March 2015 (UTC)
Thanks! It is indeed a collaborative effort! GTG SusunW (talk) 16:46, 25 March 2015 (UTC)
- I have placed a tag on the page; it really needs a copyedit to bring it up to encyclopedic standards. Lines like "She was keenly aware of house calls by the family physician. After the doctor left, everyone always seemed to feel better, Pinn noticed. The career choice seemed natural to her" belong in a magazine feature, not an encyclopedia. Yoninah (talk) 23:37, 26 March 2015 (UTC)
