Template:Did you know nominations/Vasiura Hryhoriy

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The result was: rejected by Yoninah (talk) 12:58, 8 June 2018 (UTC)

Vasiura Hryhoriy edit

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... that after the war Hryhoriy Vasiura, a Nazi-collaborator and executioner of Khatyn massacre, pretended a Red Army veteran and even instructed young Soviet pioneers in patriotism until being arrested in 1984? Source: ". Like many other collaborators, Vasiura passed himself off as a Soviet patriot who had fought the Germans as a connection officer at the front. As a veteran and supposed war hero, he even instructed young Soviet pioneers in patriotism." ([1])

Created by Катала (talk). Self-nominated at 16:31, 6 April 2018 (UTC).

Really needs grammar fixes. How about this?

ALT1... that after World War II Vasiura Hryhoriy, a Nazi-collaborator and executioner of Khatyn massacre, pretended to be a Red Army veteran and instructed young pioneers in patriotism until his arrest in 1984? Source: ". Like many other collaborators, Vasiura passed himself off as a Soviet patriot who had fought the Germans as a connection officer at the front. As a veteran and supposed war hero, he even instructed young Soviet pioneers in patriotism." ([2])

--PlanespotterA320 (talk) 19:01, 10 April 2018 (UTC)

You have five descriptions in one hook (Nazi-collaborator...executioner...pretend Red Army veteran...instructed young Soviet pioneers in patriotism...arrested). I suggest cutting it down to one or two so it will be hooky. Yoninah (talk) 20:42, 1 May 2018 (UTC)

I took a quick look at the article. Per Rule D2, many paragraphs have no citations at all. Citations need to be added before this goes ahead. Yoninah (talk) 20:45, 1 May 2018 (UTC)

Катала has not edited on Wikipedia since April 22, and has another DYK nomination that also has significant issues that haven't been addressed. Something will need to be done within a week to take care of the issues noted here, either by the nominator or someone else, at which point a full review would be requested; if nothing is done, then this will be marked for closure. BlueMoonset (talk) 17:43, 30 May 2018 (UTC)

It has been over a week, and nothing has been done. Marking for closure. BlueMoonset (talk) 05:37, 8 June 2018 (UTC)