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The result was: promoted by PFHLai (talk) 20:43, 14 February 2012 (UTC)
Tom Kerridge, The Hand and Flowers edit
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- ... that chef Tom Kerridge is the owner of The Hand and Flowers, the first pub to hold two Michelin stars?
- Reviewed: Elizabeth C. Crosby, Marriage loan
Created/expanded by Miyagawa (talk). Self nom at 22:41, 6 February 2012 (UTC)
- DYK criteria:
- Both articles are new (as of the 6th), length is good, referenced and appears to meet content policies
- Hook is short and the fact is good, but maybe flip it around (focus on the pub) and add a bit about where it is, eg ...that the Marlow, Buckinghamshire gastropub, "The Hand and Flowers" , owned by chef Tom Kerridge, is the the first pub to receive 2 Michelin Stars? You can reword that, I think it helps to locate where this is to make it interesting.
- QPQ met (twice); no image suggested so ok there.
I think just tweaking the hook should do it. --MASEM (t) 17:38, 14 February 2012 (UTC)
- I'm fine with that as an alt. So, Alt1:... that the Marlow, Buckinghamshire gastropub, The Hand and Flowers, owned by chef Tom Kerridge, is the the first pub to receive 2 Michelin Stars? Miyagawa (talk) 20:00, 14 February 2012 (UTC)
- DYK criteria:
