Template:Did you know nominations/Thomas C. Mann

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The result was: promoted by Gilderien Converse|List of good deeds 22:35, 13 December 2013 (UTC)

Thomas C. Mann edit

Mann in Mexico City

5x expanded by Groupuscule (talk). Self nominated at 01:00, 15 October 2013 (UTC).

  • 5x expansion verified. Image public domain. Adding links to LBJ and State Dept in hook. Issue regarding the hook. The article text says that the appointment was opposed by "liberal supporters of Kennedy, including Senator Hubert Humphrey". The quote contained in Ref #16 below says it was the Kennedys as well, but not not which one(s). Bobby? Ted? We need some clarification before this can run, I think. – Muboshgu (talk) 18:57, 1 November 2013 (UTC)
  • Thanks for the comments and apologies for the delayed response. I have expanded that section a little bit to include a quotation from Arthur Schlesinger, Jr., who may have to some degree originated this narrative about the Mann appointment. I would propose:
  • Or something else, I'm open-minded, but I'd like to focus on the Johnson appointment(s) so we can run the hook on one of those 50-year anniversaries! aloha! ~ groupuscule (talk) 15:49, 10 November 2013 (UTC)
  • Striking the original hook. I don't see ALT1 explicitly in the text, so we can't use that. I can give ALT 2 and ALT3 the checkmark. My preference is ALT2 – Muboshgu (talk) 21:09, 11 November 2013 (UTC)
  • Thanks Muboshgu.
  • Please run (either Alt2 or Alt3) on December 14! groupuscule (talk) 02:49, 12 November 2013 (UTC)