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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:14, 9 September 2016 (UTC)

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5x expanded by Amgisseman(BYU) (talk). Self-nominated at 17:36, 25 August 2016 (UTC).

  • No issues found with article, ready for human review.
    • ✓ This article has been expanded from 470 chars to 10542 chars since 06:25, 02 March 2015 (UTC), a 22.43-fold expansion
    • ✓ This article meets the DYK criteria at 10542 characters
    • ✓ All paragraphs in this article have at least one citation
    • ✓ This article has no outstanding maintenance tags
    • ? A copyright violation is suspected by an automated tool, with 26.5% confidence. (confirm)
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  • No overall issues detected
    • ✓ The hook ALT0 is an appropriate length at 112 characters
    • ✓ The hook ALT1 is an appropriate length at 177 characters
    • ✓ The hook ALT2 is an appropriate length at 120 characters
    • ✓ Amgisseman has more than 5 DYK credits. A QPQ review of Template:Did you know nominations/Morihiko Hiramatsu was performed for this nomination.

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  • I checked for ALT0. Article was more than 5x expanded from 465 chars to 10,520 chars at nomination time. Its sources are inline cited. I'm not sure whether the lede is proper formatted. If you don't mind I would suggest as "The Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-day Saints in French Polynesia consists of ... members, ... stakes, ... districts, ... congregations (... wards and ... branches),<ref> ... mission, and ... temple as of 6 April 2013.<ref> I get a map of Istanbul when I access ref #1. Is there any problem? Ref #2 says the number of members is 25,841 and not 22,659, the number of stakes 3 instead of 8, 90 congregations and not 83. I cannot find the reference date "6 April 2013" anywhere. Please recheck and advise also if I'm wrong. The higher copyvio rates reported by "Earwig's Copyvio Detector" are resulting from the long title of the church only. The rates have to be ignored. The hook is interesting and well formatted. Its length is within limit, and its fact is accurate and cited inline. QPQ was done. After having your comment to above issues, I will review again and approve if it's OK. CeeGee 18:58, 26 August 2016 (UTC)
  • CeeGee Thanks for your review. To be honest, I meant to go back and edit the lede before submitting for DYK and I guess I just forgot. The numbers have been edited now as well as the sources that go along with it. Is there anything else that needs to be changed there? Amgisseman(BYU) (talk) 19:21, 29 August 2016 (UTC)
  • I've expanded the lede, fixed figures in the "Status today" section, renoved the misleading reference. Everything is fine now. Good to go. CeeGee 06:44, 30 August 2016 (UTC)
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