Template:Did you know nominations/Siedlce Ghetto

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The result was: promoted by 4meter4 (talk) 06:22, 26 November 2015 (UTC)

Siedlce Ghetto

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Deportation of Jews to Treblinka death camp from the ghetto in Siedlce, 1942
Deportation of Jews to Treblinka death camp from the ghetto in Siedlce, 1942
  • ... that Cypora Zonszajn couldn't live without her closest family and returned to the Siedlce Ghetto to perish along with them (deportation pictured)?
  • ALT1: ... that prisoner of the Siedlce Ghetto, Cypora Zonszajn, who couldn't live without her husband, left the child with the rescuers and returned to die along with him (deportation pictured)?

Created by Poeticbent (talk). Self-nominated at 20:09, 5 November 2015 (UTC).

  • Created Nov 1st. Long enough (8185 characters). Neutral presentation but language sometimes a bit odd! (e.g. "Little Rachel was whisked to Zakrzówek in the summer of 1943"), which is not I suppose a criterion of DYK, but might be reconsidered. Good citations and no apparent plagiarism or excessive quotation.
  • Original hook is interesting and preferred - shorter, and ALT I doesn't add anything. I suggest replacing 'the resuers' with 'her rescuers', which reads better. Hook citation is good.
  • QPQ carried out.
  • Good to go--Smerus (talk) 18:49, 7 November 2015 (UTC)