Template:Did you know nominations/Sharad Panday

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:11, 6 October 2017 (UTC)

Sharad Panday edit

5x expanded by Fitindia (talk). Self-nominated at 10:56, 25 September 2017 (UTC).

  • QPQ done, solid expansion, in time, long enough, within policy, no copyvio, hook is interesting. Good to go! ALT1 seems better! Adityavagarwal (talk) 14:31, 25 September 2017 (UTC)
  • Hi, I came by to promote this, and saw that it needed a lot of editing for English grammar. I also reorganized the presentation. I added a "clarification needed" tag to this sentence which seems to have been copied out of something, and doesn't make sense the way it's written: This need to improvise and adapt inspired Panday to develop a surgical procedure called the Panday shunt, where from the right subclavian artery to left carotid artery for aortic arch replacement or introduction of stent mounted aortic homo-graft for mitral valve replacement. Yoninah (talk) 20:45, 26 September 2017 (UTC)
  • @Yoninah: I have made some changes please do have a look and thank you for the edits to the article it looks much better now.  FITINDIA  01:34, 27 September 2017 (UTC)
  • Thank you. Restoring tick per Adityavagarwal's review. Yoninah (talk) 09:08, 27 September 2017 (UTC)