Template:Did you know nominations/Saleh Kamboh Mosque

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:58, 2 February 2018 (UTC)

Saleh Kamboh Mosque edit

Created by Royroydeb (talk). Self-nominated at 12:49, 24 January 2018 (UTC).

  • I'll be taking a look at this shortly. Mélencron (talk) 19:01, 27 January 2018 (UTC)
  • Article was moved to mainspace from user sandbox and nominated within 7 days, contains 1576 characters of prose, is appropriately and correctly cited, and I've successfully verified all statements within the article from the given sources. There are some close similarities in parts of the article's wording (particularly when describing architectural features, e.g. "floral arabesque, interlacement kashi, fresco works, and multifoil arches", "inscription") which in my view are acceptable per WP:LIMITED, but also instances of terminology used by the sources, such as "upkeep" and "encroachments" that should be replaceable, which I've since changed. The hook is short enough, seems interesting, and is supported by a reference within the given article. QPQ was completed, but was pulled from queue area due to issues with the hook that went unnoticed; however, however, I assume the involvement with that DYKN has ceased given other editors' comments on that QPQ. Mélencron (talk) 19:27, 27 January 2018 (UTC)