Template:Did you know nominations/Renate Brümmer

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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 11:43, 28 April 2020 (UTC)

Renate Brümmer

Renate Brümmer
Renate Brümmer
  • Reviewed: Fountain of the Canals of the Pear Tree
  • Comment: The next in what appears to be a trend of early-women-astronauts-didn't-go-to-space/ nomination for WHM (if it doesn't get reviewed in time for March, her birthday in May 4, so it could go up then)

Created by Kingsif (talk). Self-nominated at 22:07, 17 March 2020 (UTC).

  • Article is long enough and new enough, no copyvio issues. QPQ done, image clear, used in article and free. I was wondering if you could suggest an ALT that focuses more on her accomplishments/her as a person? I know this is very much a subjective thing, but I feel like this hook is quite negative, and there's loads of other interesting information about her. Achaea (talk) 21:59, 19 March 2020 (UTC)
@Achaea: How about Alt1? Kingsif (talk) 22:28, 19 March 2020 (UTC)
Or even just:
  • ALT2: ... that Renate Brümmer (pictured) was Germany's first female astronaut?
Though Walpot was selected at the same time, she didn't undergo flight training (as written and cited in article). Kingsif (talk) 22:30, 19 March 2020 (UTC)