- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 16:36, 11 March 2015 (UTC)
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Rebecca Kamen edit
... that artist Rebecca Kamen (pictured) has dyslexia, which causes difficulties in reading and math but may enhance visual processing?
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... that Rebecca Kamen's sculpture Divining Nature: An Elemental Garden is inspired by the periodic table and by Buddhist mandalas? - ALT2:
... that Rebecca Kamen's sculpture Butterflies of the Soul is inspired by a Nobel prize winner's drawings of Purkinje cells?
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- Reviewed: Barbara Newman
- Comment: From ArtAndFeminism 2015 edit-a-thon; Suitable for Women's history month
Created by Mary Mark Ockerbloom (talk). Self nominated at 00:22, 4 March 2015 (UTC).
Substantial article on an interesting woman, with details on her work, on good sources. I like ALT2 by far the best, however not so much that (pictured) is missing and would need to be sqeezed in between author and work, and the passive voice. Perhaps mention "sculpture"? - In the article, avoid her name in two consecutive sentences? - Good free image, hopefully used. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 14:19, 6 March 2015 (UTC)
- Try these alternative phrasings, if they aren't too long. Mary Mark Ockerbloom (talk) 18:11, 10 March 2015 (UTC)
- ALT3: ... that Rebecca Kamen (pictured) was inspired by the periodic table and by Buddhist mandalas to create the sculpture Divining Nature: An Elemental Garden?
- ALT4: ... that Rebecca Kamen (pictured) was inspired to create the sculpture Butterflies of the Soul by a Nobel prize winner's drawings of Purkinje cells?
- Try these alternative phrasings, if they aren't too long. Mary Mark Ockerbloom (talk) 18:11, 10 March 2015 (UTC)
the last two, - I like butterflies of the soul best ;) --Gerda Arendt (talk) 09:56, 11 March 2015 (UTC)
