Template:Did you know nominations/Pokémon Sun and Moon

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Jolly Ω Janner 08:20, 14 March 2016 (UTC)

Pokémon Sun and Moon edit

Created by Owen1962 (talk). Expanded and nominated by Amberrock (talk) at 14:02, 27 February 2016 (UTC).

  • Article is new enough, just long enough (1,742 characters vs. minimum of 1,500 as of this comment), content is neutral, passes copyvio, and QPQ verifies. However, the hook is rather uninteresting to those not familiar with the smaller details of Pokémon and could be inaccurate (concept art does not mean it will appear in the final version). At present, the most interesting aspect of Sun and Moon in my opinion is the connectivity with the VC versions of Generation I. I've added an alternate hook that covers this aspect, but not entirely sure on how best to word it. Once a hook is agreed upon, we'll be good to go. ~ Cyclonebiskit (chat) 21:44, 27 February 2016 (UTC)
  • I picked the hook with the truck because I thought a cheeky hook could work and would be funny. I don't see how one needs to be familiar with the Pokémon franchise to get it, but I digress. ALT1 would also work, and I think you've done a good job wording it. We need another reviewer to look at it, I guess. So: —♦♦ AMBER(ЯʘCK) 21:56, 27 February 2016 (UTC)
Article is new enough, long enough, neutral and free from any copyright violation. The main hook is not supported by reliable sources and is based on speculations so it is not qualified as a fine hook. ALT1 is a bit too long but it is acceptable. QPQ done. AdrianGamer (talk) 13:20, 28 February 2016 (UTC)