- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 22:00, 24 June 2017 (UTC)
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Pichu Pichu edit
Pichu-Pichu from Arequipa
... that three mummies have been found on the collapsed and extinct volcano Pichu Pichu (pictured) near Arequipa?
- Reviewed: Minami Momochi
5x expanded by Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk). Self-nominated at 18:25, 20 May 2017 (UTC).
This fact is certainly interesting and probably would make a good DYK. However, there are a few wording issues with the article, although I fixed some of the ones in the mummy paragraph. The fact about 3 mummies is sourced, but source 16 does not mention Pichu Pichu as far as I could tell (there may be something I missed). The image needs to be cropped to 100x100 pixels. I also think the wording of the hook could be improved, and I suggest the following alternate:
- ALT1: ... that three mummies have been found on Pichu Pichu (pictured), an extinct volcano near Arequipa? Alexschmidt711 (talk) 23:25, 20 May 2017 (UTC)
- @Alexschmidt711: OK with alt hook, 16 does use the alternate name Picchu Picchu. Image won't work cropped - a problem with elongated volcanoes - but maybe File:Volcán Pichu Pichu - Arequipa.jpg does? Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk, contributions) 08:40, 21 May 2017 (UTC)
- ALT1: ... that three mummies have been found on Pichu Pichu (pictured), an extinct volcano near Arequipa? Alexschmidt711 (talk) 23:25, 20 May 2017 (UTC)
Full review needed by a new reviewer now that ALT1 has been proposed. BlueMoonset (talk) 14:05, 22 June 2017 (UTC)
- Interesting, on good source, offline sources accepted AGF, no copyvio obvious. I'd like a ref right after the sentence saying 3 mummies, not after the next sentence about 2 males, one female. I'd be also interest in the human sacrifices, for an ALT. Please do something about the overly long first sentence, - I'd like to know that it is a volcano before alternatives of different spelling with explanation. I was surprised by Pikchu Pikchu, a third version and unexplained. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 20:14, 23 June 2017 (UTC)
- @Gerda Arendt: Half-addressed the issues, rest will wait for tomorrow as I need to recover from this heat wave. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk, contributions) 20:37, 23 June 2017 (UTC)
- @Gerda Arendt: Did the rest, I think. For an ALT hook:
- ALT2: ... that human sacrifices were performed on Pichu Pichu (pictured), an extinct volcano near Arequipa?
- Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk, contributions) 11:00, 24 June 2017 (UTC)
Thank you! Still Pikchu Pikchu, without ref, - I trust that you will fix that. I leave the choice of hook with the prep builder, and you. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 11:28, 24 June 2017 (UTC)
- @Gerda Arendt: Did the rest, I think. For an ALT hook:
- @Gerda Arendt: Half-addressed the issues, rest will wait for tomorrow as I need to recover from this heat wave. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk, contributions) 20:37, 23 June 2017 (UTC)
