Template:Did you know nominations/Paula Hinton

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The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 17:13, 15 March 2014 (UTC)

Paula Hinton

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  • ... that Paula Hinton, who appeared in a ballet about a love triangle, was involved in a love triangle with the same two dancers?
  • ALT1 ... that Paula Hinton danced in a ballet about a love triangle, based on the real life triangle involving the same three dancers?

Created by Ipigott (talk) and Edwardx. Nominated by Victuallers (talk) at 11:34, 10 March 2014 (UTC).

interesting story on good sources. I would like to see a few more names of ballet creators. The hook is interesting and sourced, but reads less elegant than in the source. Help? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 12:34, 12 March 2014 (UTC)
I have expanded the article somewhat and had a go at a slightly more elegant hook wording. Edwardx (talk) 19:49, 13 March 2014 (UTC)
thank you, tweaked a bit, --Gerda Arendt (talk) 20:09, 13 March 2014 (UTC)
Yes, a definite improvement. Edwardx (talk) 22:06, 13 March 2014 (UTC)