Template:Did you know nominations/Pancuran Tujuh

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The result was: promoted by Allen3 ^talk 11:29, 13 April 2015 (UTC)

Pancuran Tujuh edit

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... that, according to local legend, Pancuran Tujuh was discovered by a missionary with a skin condition?

Reviewed: Crash Bandicoot: The Wrath of Cortex

Created by Crisco 1492 (talk). Self nominated at 07:50, 27 March 2015 (UTC).

Length, date, hook's ref verified. All non-lede paragraphs have refs; all refs appear to be RS. No apparent close paraphrasing. QPQ done. The beautiful imgs are from Commons. GTG. --Rosiestep (talk) 02:05, 28 March 2015 (UTC)

ALT1 ... that, according to local legend, Pancuran Tujuh was discovered by a missionary who had climbed the mountains to treat a strange skin condition? EEng (talk) 21:44, 4 April 2015 (UTC)
- I think the original has more punch; shorter and more succinct. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 01:02, 5 April 2015 (UTC)

Perhaps you're right, but I still think the skin condition should be strange. EEng (talk) 16:57, 6 April 2015 (UTC)

Except the glibness is of its own shock value; who thinks of missionaries having skin conditions?` — Crisco 1492 (talk) 23:26, 6 April 2015 (UTC)

I prefer the original. --Rosiestep (talk) 02:23, 7 April 2015 (UTC)

Father Damien EEng (talk) 02:49, 7 April 2015 (UTC)