Template:Did you know nominations/Munir Hussain (cricketer)

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The result was: promoted by Allen3 ^talk 11:04, 12 September 2013 (UTC)

Munir Hussain (cricketer) edit

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... that Munir Hussain was the first who introduced Urdu commentary to cricket?

Reviewed: Jeff Tuel

Created/expanded by Sahara4u (talk). Self nominated at 19:52, 27 August 2013 (UTC).

Article expanded significantly, QPQ done. Hook is unsourced —Vensatry _{(Ping me)} 15:28, 11 September 2013 (UTC)

Hook now supported with inline citation. Zia Khan 15:46, 11 September 2013 (UTC)

Ref #2 is dead, there are three more dead links. Ref #1 doesn't explicitly state that he introduced Urdu commentary. It only says that he was the first to propose an idea. How about ALT1: ... that Munir Hussain was the first to put forward the idea of having Urdu commentary in cricket? —Vensatry _{(Ping me)} 04:04, 12 September 2013 (UTC)

No problem, looking good. Zia Khan 04:52, 12 September 2013 (UTC)

The same should be there in the article. —Vensatry _{(Ping me)} 05:45, 12 September 2013 (UTC)

Done. Zia Khan 06:03, 12 September 2013 (UTC)

with ALT1 —Vensatry _{(Ping me)} 08:34, 12 September 2013 (UTC)