Template:Did you know nominations/Mount Carmel East
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 22:30, 24 May 2018 (UTC)
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Mount Carmel East edit
... that the land that is now Mount Carmel East was originally used as a farm that provided food for another hospital, Mount Carmel West?- ALT1: ... that Mount Carmel East sits on land that was originally used as a farm that provided food for another hospital, Mount Carmel West? Mount Carmel Health
- Reviewed: Pinewood Hospital
- Comment: Open to any other hooks that people think could be better
Improved to Good Article status by Sixflashphoto (talk). Self-nominated at 05:30, 11 May 2018 (UTC).
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Hook eligibility:
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- I'd reword the hook to emphasize that the land on which the hospital sits was the farm, not the hospital itself.
| QPQ: Done. |
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SounderBruce 04:57, 12 May 2018 (UTC)
- Good Idea. -- Sixflashphoto (talk) 13:55, 12 May 2018 (UTC)
Looks good, but I think the hook could be rewritten a bit to flow better: ... that Mount Carmel East sits on land that was originally used as a farm that provided food for another hospital, Mount Carmel West? SounderBruce 20:28, 13 May 2018 (UTC)
- @SounderBruce: Good idea for the hook, thank you! -- Sixflashphoto (talk) 03:29, 14 May 2018 (UTC)
- Good Idea. -- Sixflashphoto (talk) 13:55, 12 May 2018 (UTC)
