- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Z1720 (talk) 17:09, 8 April 2022 (UTC)
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Male Fantasy
... that Billie Eilish associates light blue color with "Male Fantasy"?Source: https://archive.today/20210810171327/https://insta-stories.online/billieeilish- ALT1:
... that Billie Eilish directed and edited video of "Male Fantasy" by herself?Source: https://pitchfork.com/news/watch-billie-eilish-new-video-for-male-fantasy/ - ALT2: ... that Billie Eilish's "Male Fantasy" reportedly "sneaks up and destroys you emotionally"?
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Improved to Good Article status by Infsai (talk). Self-nominated at 10:37, 27 February 2022 (UTC).
I'm not entirely sure if either of these hooks are interesting enough for a DYK. The alternative is more interesting than the first but I'm wondering if there are another facts about the article to suggest? GamerPro64 01:50, 11 March 2022 (UTC)- @Infsai: In case you missed my review. GamerPro64 01:23, 16 March 2022 (UTC)
- Left the nominator a message on March 31st and gave them a week to respond. If they are unable to return to this nomination by April 7th the nomination could be marked for closure as unsuccessful. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 11:14, 2 April 2022 (UTC)
- @GamerPro64 and Narutolovehinata5: suggested an ALT2 from the Rolling Stone piece? theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (she/they) 22:03, 3 April 2022 (UTC)
- I think that might fine. GamerPro64 22:54, 3 April 2022 (UTC)
- If you two think so, I can approve it.
Fine interesting GA, on good sources, no copyvio obvious. The hook leaves completely open what the bolded thing is, but obviously that is accepted for some topics. It certainly raises curiosity. - In the lead, there's his phrase "due to feeling like credits", what does that mean? - Having been picked for a final track might be a more factual thing to say, - the title seems catchy enough by itself ;) - I'd also be open for a hook about "how "stupid and unrealistic" pornography is". --Gerda Arendt (talk) 07:21, 7 April 2022 (UTC)
- @Gerda Arendt: how about an ALT3: ... that Billie Eilish's "Male Fantasy" came from her perception of pornography as "stupid and unrealistic"?
- ALT2 is still good (arguably hookier), but this is more substantial, which I know you like. Promoter can pick, if you're cool with it :) theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (she/they) 08:02, 7 April 2022 (UTC)
- good idea, thank you --Gerda Arendt (talk) 08:05, 7 April 2022 (UTC)
- (for explanation: for us foreigners who don't know the singer, Billie and Billy are so similar that it would not be necessarily recognized as a women's name) --Gerda Arendt (talk) 08:07, 7 April 2022 (UTC)
- I think that might fine. GamerPro64 22:54, 3 April 2022 (UTC)
- @GamerPro64 and Narutolovehinata5: suggested an ALT2 from the Rolling Stone piece? theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (she/they) 22:03, 3 April 2022 (UTC)
Promoted ALT2 to Prep 5. Z1720 (talk) 17:09, 8 April 2022 (UTC)